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Array ( [sid] => 94359 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Happiest Day of My Life [time] => 2005-05-14 16:42:32 [hometext] => I think this is one of my best. Please comment! :D Have a nice day! :D [bodytext] => The day of my demise
has arrived on the wings
of the wind
Leaves blowing softly
Flowers swaying
Petals falling
Trees waving
Clouds rolling in
with the tide
Today is the day I die
No happiness in my heart
Nothing to keep me from falling
apart
Loved ones have failed me
I'm singing softly
Thinking fondly
of killing myself gracefully
The happiest day of my life
is the day I die
Welcome to the day of my demise!
The rolling clouds cover the sun
The earth goes into shadows
Shards of light crack the
picturesque sky
Today is the day I die
The wind wails a sorrowful song
Tree branches scratch the window pane
Dogs bark in the vast distance
A drop of water falls
from the sky
As a single tear slides
from my eye
A thousand drops more
pitter-patter down
from the
darkened foreboding sky
Rythmic in it's tune
Soothing is it's company
The rain pauses in motion
as the clouds move position
The sun sends it's angled rays
into my presece
shining with iridescence
The storm has passed
My fears have calmed
The birds sing sweetly
through my window
I bask in the sun pondering
what I had almost done
The happiest day of my life
is the day I survive
Today is the day
I am alive



~Kortnie~ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 43 [informant] => justme03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The Happiest Day of My Life

Contributed by justme03 on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:42:32 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



The day of my demise
has arrived on the wings
of the wind
Leaves blowing softly
Flowers swaying
Petals falling
Trees waving
Clouds rolling in
with the tide
Today is the day I die
No happiness in my heart
Nothing to keep me from falling
apart
Loved ones have failed me
I'm singing softly
Thinking fondly
of killing myself gracefully
The happiest day of my life
is the day I die
Welcome to the day of my demise!
The rolling clouds cover the sun
The earth goes into shadows
Shards of light crack the
picturesque sky
Today is the day I die
The wind wails a sorrowful song
Tree branches scratch the window pane
Dogs bark in the vast distance
A drop of water falls
from the sky
As a single tear slides
from my eye
A thousand drops more
pitter-patter down
from the
darkened foreboding sky
Rythmic in it's tune
Soothing is it's company
The rain pauses in motion
as the clouds move position
The sun sends it's angled rays
into my presece
shining with iridescence
The storm has passed
My fears have calmed
The birds sing sweetly
through my window
I bask in the sun pondering
what I had almost done
The happiest day of my life
is the day I survive
Today is the day
I am alive



~Kortnie~




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Re: The Happiest Day of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 07:12:37 PM AEST
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This is indeed good. Your wording is graceful, and the theme was very well portrayed. I think it was a little longer than it needed to be, but not by much. Keep it up!

Andrew


Re: The Happiest Day of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 03:54:29 PM AEST
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damn kortnie, thats tight as hell! that was one of your best...keep writin like that girl...publish your stuff!
-Courtney
~XOXO~


Re: The Happiest Day of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by confused on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 09:04:36 AM AEST
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wow kortnie! this is so well written! you're an awesome poet *huggles* luv ya!---kate




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