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But untill then i've found heaven on earth
It's when i wake and smell your conditioner on my pillow
It's when you call and before anything else you say "I love you"
It's the thought of you when we've been apart for days
it's kissing you when we're finally reunited
it's seeing your picture when i open my wallet
it's listening to your rythmic breathing while your asleep in my arms
You ask me to promise to never hurt you
I promise i'll never hurt you
You ask me to promise to never let you go
I promise i'll always be with you
I promise these things and would die before i break them
Because you are my one piece of heaven [comments] => 8 [counter] => 287 [topic] => 2 [informant] => tin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

My One Piece of Heaven

Contributed by tin on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:32:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I know i'm going to hell when i die
But untill then i've found heaven on earth
It's when i wake and smell your conditioner on my pillow
It's when you call and before anything else you say "I love you"
It's the thought of you when we've been apart for days
it's kissing you when we're finally reunited
it's seeing your picture when i open my wallet
it's listening to your rythmic breathing while your asleep in my arms
You ask me to promise to never hurt you
I promise i'll never hurt you
You ask me to promise to never let you go
I promise i'll always be with you
I promise these things and would die before i break them
Because you are my one piece of heaven

Copyright © tin ... [ 2005-05-13 23:32:05]
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Re: My One Piece of Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:34:41 PM AEST
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This is very loving and sweet. I wish I had a love like this. You are very lucky. Cherish this love and hold it as close as you can to your heart.

Rita

Re: My One Piece of Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by surge_joebot on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:41:19 PM AEST
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awwwww thats so lovely

Re: My One Piece of Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Crimson_Valley on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 12:04:05 AM AEST
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That is SO good! I could never express my feelings like that. That was totally... Utterly... AMAZING!! I was totally blown away. Great poem.

Re: My One Piece of Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Kyarn on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:16:46 AM AEST
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This is wonderful. Very romantic, and fluffy in the best possible way. AWWWWWWWW!!!
Oh, and don't worry about the afterlife part. I'll be right there with ya. (We can have a party!)

Re: My One Piece of Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 06:34:06 AM AEST
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well done , a lovely piece

Re: My One Piece of Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 08:11:19 AM AEST
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Tin
All for the love of a woman.Marry the girl don't just lead her on.Passion is not love,but merly self indulgence.

Sinned

Re: My One Piece of Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by somedaylove on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:52:38 AM AEST
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Very nice,very sweet........never break those promises............keep it up

Re: My One Piece of Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 22nd July 2014 @ 12:24:15 AM AEST
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so sweet, loving and beautifully penned,

hugs n' love nessa

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