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[title] => My Last Ending
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My words lose meaning
As they bleed profusely
Of what they used to have
When all the lines were sad.
The words are nothing to me
When their shallowness
Bleeds through the page
Of my hated reality
Tainted by loneliness
And pain.
Writing used to be more
Than what it is now,
But I've lost my will for
The talent I've never found.
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My Last Ending
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Essentially9
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Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 08:15:19 PM in AEST
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My Last Ending
My words lose meaning
As they bleed profusely
Of what they used to have
When all the lines were sad.
The words are nothing to me
When their shallowness
Bleeds through the page
Of my hated reality
Tainted by loneliness
And pain.
Writing used to be more
Than what it is now,
But I've lost my will for
The talent I've never found.
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Re: My Last Ending
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by spazz911 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 08:26:47 PM AEST
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You can't stop writing!
I think youre an awsome poem, I've read most of yours, ur style and talent is so strong
dont let any one tell you otherwise
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Re: My Last Ending
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 09:08:13 PM AEST
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Jen, your talent was found a good while ago..you are an amazing writer...And you know I don;t need to say much..as always...
~Clark |
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Re: My Last Ending
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by greeneyes on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 09:26:00 PM AEST
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We all go through a slow period so don't give up. Just take a brake and rest your mind. Even a day can make a difference. Keep up your writing.
Nancy |
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Re: My Last Ending
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 10:21:42 PM AEST
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this poem is a testament to how your will lives on..
(writing about how ya dont wanna..)
very cool...
M.O.H.
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Re: My Last Ending
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 10:50:56 PM AEST
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Your writting takes on a meaning of it's own
i have felt like you in fact at times i still do but
it comes and it goes, talent, i hate that word
what u have is an entrance and an exit to and
from your heart, and from where i sit, i like
what i see, and enjoy what i read, please
don't take that away, 4 your sake and mind
but most of all 4 the sake of art itself . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: My Last Ending
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:12:49 PM AEST
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I remember right here on YPDC I had what I called Poemitis.....I was worn out from wriing a poem almost every day......and a dear friend, bet you remember him Norm Turkel told that if I was a true poetess, then nothing, could keep me from writing.......it's all apart of our soul.
He was right of course, I can't go anywhere, read anything, listen to music, or see a TV show that it doesn't remind me of a good poem that needs to be written.
I hope this proves to be true with you also.
You are a very good poet, and you would miss it badly I know.
Perhaps you just need a rest~!
Please stay and write more and more.
Warm Love
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Re: My Last Ending
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 02:07:31 PM AEST
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what are you saying you are a great poetress girl.keep penning.
we love ya.
awsome write by the way. |
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Re: My Last Ending
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:29:21 PM AEST
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| I've seen writes like this from you before, in terms of the topic of writing and not writing. Hopefully you're only crying wolf here, but I'm quite surprised at the timing of your post. I'm in the midst of writing my own little poem of this sort, and while It's not like I'm gonna stop writing, I think I might go into a temporary hiatus. If you do feel that you need to, by all means go for it, but never drop that pen and paper. I'm attempting to keep my comments brief, so I'll forego the actual comment on the poem itself other than it was brimming with a sort of sincerity. Great stuff. Tasty even |
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Re: My Last Ending
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:24:14 PM AEST
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Jennifer,
Hoping this is just a write. If you have any doubts about your talent look at some other sites and you will find the difference. You ARE a very talented writer and I along with those here are lucky to post along with such works as yours. The night sky will surely be much darker without you shining bright with your writes.
The Voice
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Re: My Last Ending
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 06:16:39 PM AEST
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I think most of us as writers have felt this way sometimes. It can be just another struggle to overcome and learn from.
This was very well expressed. You have the power of a simple, graceful and poetic style, which speaks much against the feelings expressed here. Those mighty themes and deeply felt insirations which make the truly powerful poetry will come again with time; just keep listening.
Something I often tell myself, as well.
Keep it up, my friend.
Andrew |
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Re: My Last Ending
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 02:41:40 PM AEST
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| "shallowness" for you Jenn...quite a depth for others....enough said. |
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Re: My Last Ending
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:43:56 AM AEST
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The talent I've never found... ?!?!?!?!?!?!
Ummm...Can I have some of this awesome talent that was never 'found' ; )
I have gone through periods like this, where I feel little or nothing to my words in my poetry. I'm sure many, if not most have. It doesn't mean that others will feel the same 'emptiness' when they read your writes, and you have a proven track record my dear!! You write from the soul, and a person can't fake that no matter how hard some try : )
Very good job with this frank piece.
Scorp. |
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