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Array ( [sid] => 94189 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => where were you [time] => 2005-05-12 17:30:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT

where were you
when i ws scared
let me guess you were out with
your boyfriend, your friends and
doing what you do best
your life
you say you love me
but when i needed you most
you were doing the things you actully love and care about
sex, drinking and smoking
where were you
when i was down
you were out and having fun
while i was alone
you were to busy having fun with your life
and with that you forgot about me
which made my life
miserable
you say you love and care
for me
buti dont think its true because
you werent there for me
when i needed you most
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 43 [informant] => bubble08 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

where were you

Contributed by bubble08 on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 05:30:38 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT

where were you
when i ws scared
let me guess you were out with
your boyfriend, your friends and
doing what you do best
your life
you say you love me
but when i needed you most
you were doing the things you actully love and care about
sex, drinking and smoking
where were you
when i was down
you were out and having fun
while i was alone
you were to busy having fun with your life
and with that you forgot about me
which made my life
miserable
you say you love and care
for me
buti dont think its true because
you werent there for me
when i needed you most

Copyright © bubble08 ... [ 2005-05-12 17:30:38]
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Re: where were you (User Rating: 1 )
by greeneyes on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:41:34 PM AEST
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This one bites, maybe look into some new friends, great write.

Nancy

Re: where were you (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:37:18 PM AEST
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Great write I really think you should talk to her though try sending her a message or leave a voicemail on her cellphone something that she checks with her friends that you would be able to get her attention with. I know for a fact she does love you though I'm a big sister and I would do anything for my little bro and sis I love them to death and I know your big sis does too..

--amanda--

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