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Im done
im done
with you breaking my hear
over and over agian
this poem is about my sister
you come home
tell me that you love me
and tell me something that i dont want to know
with that you break my heart
please tell me why
why do you do it
im done
im done with you
i dont care about you
okay, i love and miss you
but you cross the line when
you ditch me for your boyfriend and friends
and you just leave me standing there alone
what do you expect
okay im jelous, i know
can you blame me
im done
with you making me cry
when i see you
hear you
think about you
talk to you
im sorry but i have to say it
IM DONE I SAY IT IM DONE

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 23 [informant] => bubble08 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

Im Done

Contributed by bubble08 on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:45:34 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

PLEASE COMMENT!!!!

Im done
im done
with you breaking my hear
over and over agian
this poem is about my sister
you come home
tell me that you love me
and tell me something that i dont want to know
with that you break my heart
please tell me why
why do you do it
im done
im done with you
i dont care about you
okay, i love and miss you
but you cross the line when
you ditch me for your boyfriend and friends
and you just leave me standing there alone
what do you expect
okay im jelous, i know
can you blame me
im done
with you making me cry
when i see you
hear you
think about you
talk to you
im sorry but i have to say it
IM DONE I SAY IT IM DONE

Copyright © bubble08 ... [ 2005-05-11 18:45:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Im Done (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:34:09 PM AEST
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yeah this made me feel like **** but it was a wonderful poem really I would of thought my little sister wrote it she's always saying things like that.. overly sensitive though... why don't you try talking with your sister leave her notes or something.. great write I loved it.

--amanda--

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