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To Feel
Contributed by
tiggytom
on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 04:10:13 PM in AEST
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Feeling bears no relation to the inner meaning
Self absorbed too much involved in you
Pull back and let me through
A place where I dont feel safe
A time where I could erase
Over you is how I feel
But under you I still remain
Holding your scythe way up yonder
Blaming everyone you meet
For your own defeat
Taking as you want and not as you need
The last to stand, the first to fall
The baby configures its walk to a crawl
Infantile in thought, so old inside a mind so caught
Trapped is how I feel
Realising so late how it is to feel
Save me now from my self obsession
Take me friend show me
Whats been missing
Copyright ©
tiggytom
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2005-05-11 16:10:13]
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Re: To Feel
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 08:18:48 AM AEST
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Very deep writing.
huggs,
emy
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