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Contributed by
Northernrick
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Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 05:30:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I regret to look back
the love that I lack,
It was hard
but I got through.,
all because of you.
I look at everyone else
I get jealous
because its not myself.
Theres someone new
I hate her too,
she made you worse
she made you change,
you still love her
yet she drives you insane.
You arent there for me
you never were,
but you always run to her.
I wish it could have changed
I never did
you thought I was a bad kid.
I might have not done well
but I tried
that wasnt good enough for you,
I wish I could have just died.
Now you are gone
you probably regret
the stuff that you said,
but it wont change
its stuck in my head.
I dont want you now
I have given up
Ive moved on
you ***** up
I tried for you
in everything I do.
You still look away,
Its not that hard to say.
I Love You
Copyright ©
Northernrick
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2005-05-10 17:30:28]
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Re: Past
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:47:18 PM AEST
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Just so Beautiful... I sure can relate to your pain..
*sigh* keep up the great writing
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: Past
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:33:48 AM AEST
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You are becoming one of my favorite poets! Your writing is absolutely beautiful, you write with your heart and I love it. Amazing write. The flow was thrown off a few places but this was just too beautiful for me to care about flow.
Wonderful piece!
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