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Array ( [sid] => 93786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Achilles [time] => 2005-05-09 12:00:45 [hometext] => I have always liked Achilles. In this poem, I imagined myself as his lover, both hurt and loved by him. [bodytext] => Erase that smug on your face.
You need not to pretend, I know
you are strong and I will always be
the weakling that you will carry.

As you wash the blood on your hands,
I could almost taste its metallic
bitterness where you often plunge while I
watch in melancholic fascination.

Achilles, lay with me tonight.
I yearn to touch those calloused hands
and untangle your flaxen strands…
The only help I could offer.

At passions’ height I sense your weakness,
your need, your ache, your hunger.
I hold your heel.
Erase that smug on your face.
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Achilles

Contributed by frustratedwitch on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:00:45 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Erase that smug on your face.
You need not to pretend, I know
you are strong and I will always be
the weakling that you will carry.

As you wash the blood on your hands,
I could almost taste its metallic
bitterness where you often plunge while I
watch in melancholic fascination.

Achilles, lay with me tonight.
I yearn to touch those calloused hands
and untangle your flaxen strands…
The only help I could offer.

At passions’ height I sense your weakness,
your need, your ache, your hunger.
I hold your heel.
Erase that smug on your face.




Copyright © frustratedwitch ... [ 2005-05-09 12:00:45]
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Re: Achilles (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:20:23 PM AEST
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Nice! An interesting read indeed....
Scorp.


Re: Achilles (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:30:30 PM AEST
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amazing how stories carry on for near eternity, nice take on achilles...
~Remy~




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