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Array ( [sid] => 93486 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Child of the Moon [time] => 2005-05-06 14:46:19 [hometext] => Was she real... or was it all in my head? [bodytext] => Slender, milk-white face,
Wide midnight eyes, searching,
Gentle hunger sleeping within them,
Her tireless curiosity caressing my body…

She stars at me as if a painting,
Pale surprise, depthless inquisition,
White dress whispering in the wind,
Head tilted, drinking all of me in…

She sits on a withering bench of lost childhood,
A moonlit enigma with undressing eyes,
Leaving me naked and vulnerable,
With just one lingering gaze…

Ancient, knowing,
Her pallid form radiated wisdom,
None of which any child possessed,
So much like I, she seemed…

A beautiful illusion, ebony curls dancing in the breeze,
Hands stretched out to embrace,
What, I know not,
For I was surely not in that world,
In her presence…

Surely, she would not wish to touch the Tainted,
Unholy flesh, a false image of broken dreams…


Yet, here she dwells,
Buried in my arms, a soft, breathing fantasy,
A radiant ghost of my past,
Long forgotten in the midst of misery,
Preserved deep within my memory…

Crystals in her eternal eyes,
Stars falling down her cheeks,
A sigh of bliss,
Oh, such a beautiful melody escaping her ruby lips,

“I have found you at last…”

And just as quickly as she appeared,
Once more, she vanished,
A fading vision of moonlit fantasy…
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Child of the Moon

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:46:19 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac



Slender, milk-white face,
Wide midnight eyes, searching,
Gentle hunger sleeping within them,
Her tireless curiosity caressing my body…

She stars at me as if a painting,
Pale surprise, depthless inquisition,
White dress whispering in the wind,
Head tilted, drinking all of me in…

She sits on a withering bench of lost childhood,
A moonlit enigma with undressing eyes,
Leaving me naked and vulnerable,
With just one lingering gaze…

Ancient, knowing,
Her pallid form radiated wisdom,
None of which any child possessed,
So much like I, she seemed…

A beautiful illusion, ebony curls dancing in the breeze,
Hands stretched out to embrace,
What, I know not,
For I was surely not in that world,
In her presence…

Surely, she would not wish to touch the Tainted,
Unholy flesh, a false image of broken dreams…


Yet, here she dwells,
Buried in my arms, a soft, breathing fantasy,
A radiant ghost of my past,
Long forgotten in the midst of misery,
Preserved deep within my memory…

Crystals in her eternal eyes,
Stars falling down her cheeks,
A sigh of bliss,
Oh, such a beautiful melody escaping her ruby lips,

“I have found you at last…”

And just as quickly as she appeared,
Once more, she vanished,
A fading vision of moonlit fantasy…




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Re: Child of the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 03:28:24 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem deep meaning and eventfull memories ,a true work of art . . .

Dorian Chambers



Re: Child of the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 05:15:04 PM AEST
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Stephy this was extraordinarly beautiful. You capture the essence of this being so well. Like a a vivid memory that dances across ur mind. A divine piece of poetry written by a truly talented poetess. Well done Stephy.
*hugs*
~sue~


Re: Child of the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 06:16:45 PM AEST
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ohhhhh Steph you intrique me with your writes this is an absolute beaut for sure
so vivid lovely mysterious
Michelle


Re: Child of the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:31:02 AM AEST
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Beautiful Steph the imagery you have
presented here will stay with me for a long
time. I absolutely loved this it was written with
flawless precision.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Child of the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 04:40:44 PM AEST
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I imagine she was real ... and was/is within your head ... I imagine she is a part of you you thought long departed. I hope she comes back to visit you again in other moments that you perceive her presence. You captured her well Steph you captured ... you.

Nazzy ~




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