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My Needs
Contributed by
freckle
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Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 09:19:47 PM in AEST
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My Needs
If only you knew
my dreams and hopes
how I wish for simple things
like a loving home
a fulfilling job
and enough money
to make my world
go round
How I don't need a mansion
or the highest paying job
or the biggest bank account
on the block
to be happy
I just need to know
in my heart
your love for me
and to see
the faces of the children
I helped create
I just need a dry roof
over our heads
and enough food
to feed us and any
who enter hungry
Money enough
to see the joy
a summer vacation brings
and that the bills
are all paid
I don't need much
but I will always
need you
by my side
Carol
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freckle
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2005-05-05 21:19:47]
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Re: My Needs
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:41:51 AM AEST
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This was so innocent so child like in it's quest, that makes it beautiful . . .
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Re: My Needs
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:21:10 PM AEST
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| i agree with ben, and id like to see a better attitude towards your writing, because it just makes me think that if you think its bad, or isnt good enough, why post it? i like to see writers sure of their abilities and knowing the poem is good, even if not their best. we all want things, but the lucky ones are the ones that work to get them. |
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