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[sid] => 93266
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Pushed away
[time] => 2005-05-04 13:06:12
[hometext] => Basically my friendships are not lasting again, and now I have upset a very good friend of mine who I don't wish to lose. I'm sorry. (Btw...this is not here for comments or critique...)
[bodytext] => A nightmare flew before my eyes,
The world had crashed, I could feel it die,
I heard it shatter, but could not see,
Through tears of which were drowning me.
I heard a voice call out my name,
I could hear echoes here for many days,
I never knew I had pushed away,
Until I realized way too late.
And I screamed out loud, to ease the pain,
Begged and called, 'come back again'
But once you came, it came again,
realization, I am not a friend.
I cried myself into the shame,
I knew I was the one to blame,
I never knew I had pushed away,
Until too late.
[comments] => 15
[counter] => 295
[topic] => 61
[informant] => lostinmyself
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 49
[ratings] => 10
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => selfstruggles
)
Pushed away
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:06:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A nightmare flew before my eyes,
The world had crashed, I could feel it die,
I heard it shatter, but could not see,
Through tears of which were drowning me.
I heard a voice call out my name,
I could hear echoes here for many days,
I never knew I had pushed away,
Until I realized way too late.
And I screamed out loud, to ease the pain,
Begged and called, 'come back again'
But once you came, it came again,
realization, I am not a friend.
I cried myself into the shame,
I knew I was the one to blame,
I never knew I had pushed away,
Until too late.
Copyright ©
lostinmyself
... [
2005-05-04 13:06:12]
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Re: Pushed away
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:11:05 PM AEST
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good write can completely relate. we are our worst enemy.
jen |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:20:05 PM AEST
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no comment,and no critique, just a big *hug* for Phil!!! Great expression!
(((((((phil)))))) who still remains my friend! :-)
love ya girlfriend!
angel always.....joni |
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Re: Pushed away
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:22:52 PM AEST
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| I kind of feel that way too. Good write |
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Re: Pushed away
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:29:34 PM AEST
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awwww. lost! *hugs* If you need an ear, you know where to find me. I know you, and I know you never give up on people and are always open to making up. Anway, it's a beautiful poem and I hope the person realizes this.
*hugs* again. |
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Re: Pushed away
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:41:54 PM AEST
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so sad my friend well you couldnt push me away if you tried if you need me Im a click away
Michelle |
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Re: Pushed away
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:21:10 PM AEST
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awww philly hugs .
Will you can never push me away.
awsome write girl.
love ya hugs |
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Re: Pushed away
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:22:03 PM AEST
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| this gave me chills...good poem! |
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Re: Pushed away
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:18:14 PM AEST
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What a emotive write. I don't wanna say much but thid got me really teary eyed while i was reading it.
Your a powerful poet Phil and will always be a good friend no matter what.
hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Pushed away
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:16:08 PM AEST
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I'll just say I can really relate to this; and I am concerned that I may have inadvertently upset some.....on YPDC
Will |
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Re: Pushed away
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:34:20 PM AEST
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Phil may ur heart never have anymore sadness flow its way. May the sun shine brighter ur way casting rays of love to warm ur sad heart. Ure an incredible loving person. An eternity of heartfelt hugs for a dear friend in need.
*Hugs*,
~sue~ |
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Re: Pushed away
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:16:41 PM AEST
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chaulk it up 2 experience phill, now u know
where i've been, wait till it happens when your
not even guilty of doing anything, never
blame your self 4 the other persons
insecurity, great poem, and u r a great person
not to mention great artist, . . . ((((((PMT)))))
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Pushed away
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:19:25 PM AEST
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Great write, I can relate, thanks for posting this!!
Leia |
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:35:35 AM AEST
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( Squeezies )
Phil ... you are a friend ... and perhaps the best kind. You just tend to be way to hard on yourself. Lighten up. You deserve to be treated kindly ... and that means from you, to you, too ...
Nazzy ~
( always here ) |
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Re: Pushed away
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:37:41 PM AEST
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We all tend to upset people at times as we are only human, look at me i'm king of it!
great writing phil.
Johnny. |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 09:10:07 PM AEST
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I am not sure what to say about this.
It is beautiful.
You are a truely sensitive person and we all have our rough days.
I sure hope the daft nut you wrote this for realizes that...somehow I think he does....Hug! |
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