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Array ( [sid] => 93259 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All her Fault and Blame [time] => 2005-05-04 11:53:56 [hometext] => This is about my old Foster Sister [bodytext] => She's scarred and she's bruised
She's empty and used
She can't stand her own face in the mirror
She closes her eyes and pretends nothings there
If you ask her to share
All the truth in her fears
You will find that you've made a mistake
She's given you all you can take
There is no going back
You must face the facts
They're force feeding her every meal
Never wonder why, or how, she might feel
The lights are all green
But she just can't see
I'm telling her to push off, and go
But her world is just moving to slow
Her eyes just close
But no tears hit the floor
She's cried every tear she can shed
Maybe she'll use your's instead
She's bitter and she's cold
Tired of doing what she's told
Maybe she'll just break free and run
They'll never miss her, because she's already gone. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 8 [informant] => Coyote_Can_Not_Count [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )

All her Fault and Blame

Contributed by Coyote_Can_Not_Count on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:53:56 AM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

She's scarred and she's bruised
She's empty and used
She can't stand her own face in the mirror
She closes her eyes and pretends nothings there
If you ask her to share
All the truth in her fears
You will find that you've made a mistake
She's given you all you can take
There is no going back
You must face the facts
They're force feeding her every meal
Never wonder why, or how, she might feel
The lights are all green
But she just can't see
I'm telling her to push off, and go
But her world is just moving to slow
Her eyes just close
But no tears hit the floor
She's cried every tear she can shed
Maybe she'll use your's instead
She's bitter and she's cold
Tired of doing what she's told
Maybe she'll just break free and run
They'll never miss her, because she's already gone.

Copyright © Coyote_Can_Not_Count ... [ 2005-05-04 11:53:56]
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Re: All her Fault and Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by stinger on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:08:19 PM AEST
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powerful write and exactly the reason i'm going to be a foster parent , there are good people out here, keep writing.

Re: All her Fault and Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by Sonic_phoenix on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:15:41 PM AEST
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Thats true i know it from hre point of view and there is nothing that feels better then be free after being caged
jen

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