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[sid] => 93232
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Death Lay over her
[time] => 2005-05-04 05:44:07
[hometext] => this poetry is bout beeing so close to death,please comment
[bodytext] => she lay there still,her body made no movement she lay un concious, having no idea who lay over her. her blood had frozen,due to the cold wind that hit upon her bare body the fear of her death now reached her brain, was there any one around to save,what she had spent years developing. was there anyone so kind as to give her back her breath. now the weight on her body started to increse. her body no longer able to take the pain, started to lose heart beat. she was coming in and out of concious, . she felt like her hands were held down by some one. now her body had lost its ability to feel. now the waight over her body reduced.and her blood started flowing through her vains again. she started breathing slowing now.she fealt like she had come to life again but as she regained full conciousnes a tear rolled down from her eye, she felt like her life had been squesed out of her. now she killed herself. for something very valuble had been taken away from her. now i ask. Was It Death That lay over Her ? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 13 [informant] => gangster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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