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[aid] => mick
[title] => Phone Sects
[time] => 2005-05-04 00:25:53
[hometext] => I've been playing with this one for a bit ... it has a bit of a twist and a kick
[bodytext] => ~~
The intercourse of intellect
Where endless hours have been spent
I pull her close and hold her near
Whispered words caress my ear
I hang on every word she says
By her mouth my will is bled
She swallows all my worthless pride
And tells me how it feels inside
I want to go, she's not yet done
In fact she's only just begun
A check she'll take or card she'll bill
She's really good this one has skill
And suddenly a tempo change
Hard and fast forget the pain
Yesterday is long since gone
Swept away by siren song
Right here, right now, we both succumb
Senses tingle, bodies numb
I pledge to her I will be there
And settle back into my chair
Her "Super" reviews my information
As she thanks me for this years donation
~~
( I thought about the title "Ode To A Non Profit Phone Solicitor" )
( But I liked the one I chose much better )
[comments] => 17
[counter] => 295
[topic] => 25
[informant] => Nazmythian
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[ratings] => 7
[editpoem] => 1
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Phone Sects
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Nazmythian
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:25:53 AM in AEST
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The intercourse of intellect
Where endless hours have been spent
I pull her close and hold her near
Whispered words caress my ear
I hang on every word she says
By her mouth my will is bled
She swallows all my worthless pride
And tells me how it feels inside
I want to go, she's not yet done
In fact she's only just begun
A check she'll take or card she'll bill
She's really good this one has skill
And suddenly a tempo change
Hard and fast forget the pain
Yesterday is long since gone
Swept away by siren song
Right here, right now, we both succumb
Senses tingle, bodies numb
I pledge to her I will be there
And settle back into my chair
Her "Super" reviews my information
As she thanks me for this years donation
~~
( I thought about the title "Ode To A Non Profit Phone Solicitor" )
( But I liked the one I chose much better )
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Nazmythian
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2005-05-04 00:25:53]
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Re: Phone Sects
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:57:01 AM AEST
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That's certainly true I would imagene.
Well done.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:01:02 AM AEST
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Nazzy,
I love this!!! It is sexy, clever and well written!!!
Leia |
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:04:42 AM AEST
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| Ooh..beautiful twist with a lovely kick....its a brilliant and delightful work..:-) venkat |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:06:33 AM AEST
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lol very cool, clever and very sensual lol way to go. :D
SM |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:06:14 AM AEST
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| It is a very appropriate title. the verses support it well. |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:16:14 AM AEST
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Scott, this was just sexy and sensualy good.
I love it, this is something i haven't seen you do before and i must say i love this new pace your going.
Nice work you naughty boy LOL.
Jane~ |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:09:49 AM AEST
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Yeah, it got me going (not in a wierd way of course....completely normal and healthy). I liked the poem overall, but there are a lot of absolute gems in this piece that outshine their setting.
Spike |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:18:09 AM AEST
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Ah, so it's the phone solicitor now, hmmm? Who will it be next, mister?? lol. J/K. Loved this, cute, smart, sexy, and a delightful twist that put a smirk on my face! Gorgeous, as always, and a hint of humour. Yes, I like this very much, Nazzy. Hope to see more of these teasers! All my love. Forever,
Your dear friend,
Stephy! *who is always amazed and in awe by your talent* |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:55:52 AM AEST
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| This was a good write with a lot of wit in it. Very well worded and really engages the mind and makes you think about the words as you read them. You have so much talent in your writes and they are very nice to read as always. Take care and I look forward to more of your work to come…..Steve |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:06:18 AM AEST
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Well it's as funny as you said it would be.
Only...
If I'm not mistaken, she paid -you- , didn't she?
(mwah ha ha)
Seriously though, a funny write. |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:31:30 PM AEST
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Lol its funny and alittle twisted and beautiful.
Nazzy you are one of a kind lol.
well done |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:06:42 PM AEST
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*mouth hangin' open*
I'm seeing a new side of you... what do I say? These words were written in a soft spoken tone? Ummmm..... you didn't give everyone my number now did you? lol or how about....Nazzy...awesome as always! Yeah that's better!
WAY TO GOOOOOOO!!!!!! ~joooooooni~ |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:02:32 PM AEST
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*rushes to phone and picks up receiver*
*begins dialing*
*realizes she is being watched*
*tries to appear nonchalent as she returns the receiver to the cradle, grinning*
Love this, Nazzy! I'll just steal part of Stephy's comment ---- and say "Loved this, cute, smart, sexy, and a delightful twist that put a smirk on my face".
Fun stuff!
~Snemmy~ |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:08:25 PM AEST
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| Wow! LOVE the wordplay. I'll have to check out some of yer other stuff... |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:42:51 PM AEST
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Naz,
.....clever, sexy, and funny, along witih the twist.
Good work
Will |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:49:36 PM AEST
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This is good,
I'll have to read it again after my nap.
One of my poetry hatreds
is how many yuppies write
lame attempts at sarcasm on telemarketers.
You went a more intelligent
and original route with your words here.
Which as a reader and fan I am thankful for.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Phone Sects
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:35:02 PM AEST
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Lol. I like this.
Bad, rude, Naz.
Heehee.
The twist at the end is really clever and I also found myself smirking. Though, knowing you, that didn't really surprise me. lol.
Great write hunni,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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