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Massacred Heart
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:11:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You cut me and sliced my heart till it bled dry
You werent satisfied till you saw me cry
My heart is wounded and everyday it fails
To beat once more inflicted by your nails
Im bleeding for all eternity I cant stop the stream
Internally wasting while my heart stops to scream
Why are you so bloodthirsty all I wanted was to love you
I need to be sewn up for all the murderous acts you do
Nothing but darkness seems to be filling
My soul you violently wrought apart
You dont realize the blood is still spilling
From my small massacred heart.
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-05-03 08:11:55]
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Re: Massacred Heart
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:38:38 AM AEST
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This was really good, i liked the darkness of this.
It's a little edgy on the sides but non the less it has a spark to it.
Nice write Phunka Ranch.
Jane~ |
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Re: Massacred Heart
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 04:39:34 PM AEST
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This is a truly great write. I like the way u capture ur feelings and lay them down. Remarkable as always my dear friend.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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