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You weren’t satisfied till you saw me cry
My heart is wounded and everyday it fails
To beat once more inflicted by your nails
I’m bleeding for all eternity I can’t stop the stream
Internally wasting while my heart stops to scream
Why are you so bloodthirsty all I wanted was to love you
I need to be sewn up for all the murderous acts you do

Nothing but darkness seems to be filling
My soul you violently wrought apart
You don’t realize the blood is still spilling
From my small massacred heart.
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Massacred Heart

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:11:55 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You cut me and sliced my heart till it bled dry
You weren’t satisfied till you saw me cry
My heart is wounded and everyday it fails
To beat once more inflicted by your nails
I’m bleeding for all eternity I can’t stop the stream
Internally wasting while my heart stops to scream
Why are you so bloodthirsty all I wanted was to love you
I need to be sewn up for all the murderous acts you do

Nothing but darkness seems to be filling
My soul you violently wrought apart
You don’t realize the blood is still spilling
From my small massacred heart.

Copyright Â© pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-05-03 08:11:55]
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Re: Massacred Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:38:38 AM AEST
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This was really good, i liked the darkness of this.
It's a little edgy on the sides but non the less it has a spark to it.

Nice write Phunka Ranch.

Jane~

Re: Massacred Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 04:39:34 PM AEST
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This is a truly great write. I like the way u capture ur feelings and lay them down. Remarkable as always my dear friend.
Hugs,
~sue~

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