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Just

you & me

SultryRose's Signatures

Twenty years of life
tries to cover in strife.
When our bodies sag
with age, eternal is our crave.

When we get old
jus let me sit on yo lap
while ocean eyes
carress brown ones to rest.
repeat.

You'll still be jungle king
while our luv songs ring.
When our bodies are
6 ft. under we'll be dancing
over yonder.

Our romance want falter dear
It's all in these songs here.
bouncing on moon beams lite
Turning our luv to star lite.
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LET ME

Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:47:34 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Just

you & me

SultryRose's Signatures

Twenty years of life
tries to cover in strife.
When our bodies sag
with age, eternal is our crave.

When we get old
jus let me sit on yo lap
while ocean eyes
carress brown ones to rest.
repeat.

You'll still be jungle king
while our luv songs ring.
When our bodies are
6 ft. under we'll be dancing
over yonder.

Our romance want falter dear
It's all in these songs here.
bouncing on moon beams lite
Turning our luv to star lite.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-05-03 02:47:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: LET ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 03:25:52 AM AEST
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Aww emy!!!

This is so beautiful, so deep, so touching..
It rang so true..
Touching poem, you've portrayed your thoughts so well....

Awesome awesome awesome!

*is left somewhat speechless...amazing*

You have true talent hun :)

~kt

Re: LET ME (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 03:44:43 AM AEST
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Emy, this was just so beautiful.
no matter how old someone is it's always important to see whats within and not whats outside.

Glad i saw this today, great write your majestic poetess.

Hugs,
Jane~

Re: LET ME (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:16:16 AM AEST
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emy,
you always write the most beautiful peices.. touching the heart in ways words cannot express...
tasha

Re: LET ME (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:49:03 AM AEST
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Wow..its an ageless poem.very impressive. huggs my dear friend..venkat

Re: LET ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:53:11 AM AEST
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Great poem. I am always inspired by lasting love.

Re: LET ME (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:25:26 AM AEST
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what awesome writing
this is really original and i loved reading it

Re: LET ME (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:38:51 AM AEST
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Emy this is so heavenly beautiful as only u can write it. Divine and ever so heart touching. No matter how old we get it's what's on the inside that counts. Well done dear friend.
Hugs,
~sue~

Re: LET ME (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:05:57 AM AEST
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YOU'RE TRUELY AN ARTIST,BUT WITH WORDS AS YOUR LOVE & CREATIVENESS CAN SURELY BE HEARD! YOU'VE GOT ONE HEART THAT HEAVEN CAN'T EVER REPEAT!! YOUR POEM,& HEART IS FELT ALL THE WAY THROUGH,AS IT WILL ALWAYS BE SO TRUE!!! GOD BLESS YOU!!!!

Lot Of Love,
DAN!!!!!

Re: LET ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:13:54 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful write, emy, so touching and lovely. Another great write by a great poetess.

Re: LET ME (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:58:42 AM AEST
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Beautiful Emy. Bravo very impressive write

Love Angelxxx

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