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[aid] => mick
[title] => Soul
[time] => 2002-07-22 07:46:21
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[bodytext] => Twisted
Twisted,
by the morbid demons inside
maybe by tonight
I will finally realize
that my only hope is suicide--
Tortured
Tortured,
by self inflicted thoughts
for free, this soul could not be bought
realizing that my twisted soul
is to coward to do this deed
my mind constricts
knowing I'll never be freed
Death
Death,
but freedom I say
to eliminate these boundaries
and take me away
away from this life
away form this hell
away form this......death?
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Soul
Contributed by
Tonic
on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 07:46:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Twisted
Twisted,
by the morbid demons inside
maybe by tonight
I will finally realize
that my only hope is suicide--
Tortured
Tortured,
by self inflicted thoughts
for free, this soul could not be bought
realizing that my twisted soul
is to coward to do this deed
my mind constricts
knowing I'll never be freed
Death
Death,
but freedom I say
to eliminate these boundaries
and take me away
away from this life
away form this hell
away form this......death?
Copyright ©
Tonic
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2002-07-22 07:46:21]
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Re: Soul
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by Rose on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 11:12:34 AM AEST
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Sometimes this is tough, not sure if the composer really means this, or is just writing. a very sad write this one is. Hope you really don't mean it. if so, I hope and pray for you, for better times.
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Re: Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:07:39 AM AEST
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Heather, I guess I should first start off saying I am sorry, but I realize I can never really say it enough. I hear that you are happy now and I am really happy to hear that. I now I fu**ed up alot, and that most of our problems were my fault. I was totally afraid of what I was feeling for you so inside I denied myself the thought of being in love. I look back now as I have many times before and think to myself, what the hell was my problem?, I know I took your love for granted, I know I was an a**hole, I know didn't do most of the things I should have done like, paid attention to you when I came home from work, or slept within 3 feet of you, I know if I would have paid attention to half the conversations we had we would have had a better chance of staying together, I also know, that I did love you, ........more than anything is this world. To answer your question of whether I miss you or not....... I miss you every minute that I am awake, I miss you in every dream I have, everything I own reminds me of you, most of the things in Brandon's and April's house reminds me of you, my family still ask about you, I've dated a few other girls, and I always end up comparing them to you, and it ends because they can't touch you and the things you did for me, I had it all when I had you, and I threw it all away, over what? You mean the world to me and always will, but I know that you and I will probably never be together again, and I have to deal with that for the rest of my life. I realize you are happy now, and I really don't give a s**t what anyone thinks but I really glad you are happy. I've had my most cherishable moments with you, moments that have shaped who I am and the person I will eventually grow to be, I love you for that, and everything you've done for me, but most of all I love you, for the way you loved me. I will never forget you and I will never stop loving you.
Love Always,
Kevin Kelly |
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Re: Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:10:52 AM AEST
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kevin,
i stopped talking to you because the words you say, you dont always meen. you said that you will always love me, yet you don't. you said you wanted to be firends but you kissed me in the park. your confussed and are confussing me. i am so sorry but i don't think you are what i need right now. i will not have my heart broken again, not that i would ever let you get that close again. HONESTLY, you can be and are most times a hatefull person, especially when we were in a relationship together. |
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