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You say you love me! I look into your eyes and see this is no lie!

Yet you ignore my existance. I am fading into the lonely core that swallows me with depression!

the emptyness of being ignored! I dont know how too stop this! I talk though i am not heard. I am fading

day by day until the day i completly fade will you even notice or wonder why? I dont know and i am praying that

one day you will hold me and fill my soul with the love you hold inside.

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lonely

Contributed by aprilrose on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:29:31 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You say you love me! I look into your eyes and see this is no lie!

Yet you ignore my existance. I am fading into the lonely core that swallows me with depression!

the emptyness of being ignored! I dont know how too stop this! I talk though i am not heard. I am fading

day by day until the day i completly fade will you even notice or wonder why? I dont know and i am praying that

one day you will hold me and fill my soul with the love you hold inside.

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Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:31:56 AM AEST
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very good write! i love this poem!
great job!

Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:50:22 AM AEST
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well expressed, good job

Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 11:24:01 AM AEST
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Well done lovely writting very heartfelt . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 01:41:33 PM AEST
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very strong writing, and full of emotions. I liked it a lot, especially "day by day until the day i completely fade"... how rhymeful and vivid! Keep up the good writing.

Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by bhavik on Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 11:54:20 PM AEST
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as real as it can get,you captured the feeling right.

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