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Array ( [sid] => 92409 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In This Room [time] => 2005-04-27 08:02:06 [hometext] => flowers there are few [bodytext] => As I lie here in this room
No tears is all I ask
The lighting is some what masked
I have been embalmed

Pictures hang of another age
A girl in white on a swing
Cherry blossoms pink of some spring
Pictures of life,but anothers page

Flowers scattered there are few
Eyes tightly closed
Hands crossed
Rosery beads a prayer I never knew

Eyes closed staring up
Looking down
So few around
In a back room coffee cups

Don't you touch my cold cold hand
One that once ment so much
No longer do I want your touch
I lived in hell and am still condemed

The tunnel of light I have passed through
Love waved me by
Satan had my eye
Goulish demons,but none as tough

Mercy mercy to no advail
Cries of anguish gnashing of teeth
Sin of evils all sorts of trash
Life and eternity of a living hell

Only I know my fate
Come general judgement day
Everyone then see they may
Satan above all is what I now hate

The fallen angel in disquize
Love is pleasure
Pleasure is love
Hear those living who think so wize

Sinned

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In This Room

Contributed by sinned on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 08:02:06 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As I lie here in this room
No tears is all I ask
The lighting is some what masked
I have been embalmed

Pictures hang of another age
A girl in white on a swing
Cherry blossoms pink of some spring
Pictures of life,but anothers page

Flowers scattered there are few
Eyes tightly closed
Hands crossed
Rosery beads a prayer I never knew

Eyes closed staring up
Looking down
So few around
In a back room coffee cups

Don't you touch my cold cold hand
One that once ment so much
No longer do I want your touch
I lived in hell and am still condemed

The tunnel of light I have passed through
Love waved me by
Satan had my eye
Goulish demons,but none as tough

Mercy mercy to no advail
Cries of anguish gnashing of teeth
Sin of evils all sorts of trash
Life and eternity of a living hell

Only I know my fate
Come general judgement day
Everyone then see they may
Satan above all is what I now hate

The fallen angel in disquize
Love is pleasure
Pleasure is love
Hear those living who think so wize

Sinned

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Re: In This Room (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 08:53:13 AM AEST
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It sad and nice and yes love is pleasure .....

Re: In This Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Kyarn on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:03:29 AM AEST
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I really like this one. Good job all around.
~kyarn

Re: In This Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:36:14 AM AEST
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Very sad .....
good job.

Re: In This Room (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:51:51 AM AEST
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i love the style of this poem, its one i could never myself master. your symbolic words set such an atmosphere... i love this poem. although it is sad, it does not prevent the truth in it. amazing and brilliant,
luv n hugs,
jennie*

Re: In This Room (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 07:06:19 PM AEST
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Wow This is sad, but great. I loved the imagery u cast into the readers head. Another brillant piece of poetry from u my dear friend. But I sense there is more to it between the lines. An awesome piece so well written.
Hugs,
~sue~

Re: In This Room (User Rating: 1 )
by kitty_express2001 on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:13:20 PM AEST
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I loved this poem:)

Re: In This Room (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:58:44 PM AEST
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amazing wirte
the beginning got me going right away and kept me going throughout the whole piece
very emotional
i felt the intensity and emotion put into this write
ready for more

Sweetstranger

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