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[sid] => 92380
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Wouldn't Be That Bad
[time] => 2005-04-26 22:25:53
[hometext] => These are more like lyrics, except here i'm only using the chorus once (3rd stanza)...I need to put guitar to it. Comments/critique appreciated
[bodytext] => It wouldn't have been bad I'm trying, promise No, I'm not mad But it wouldn't be bad... Drifting off in your arms Wishing you'd just kill me now How I love all that we are Thinking I'm broken but you'll show me how Thought you'd show me how to live Thinking just kill me now Think I love all that this is Yeah I thought, but not now So you were drifting off in my arms I was wishing you'd just kill me now Thinking bout how beautiful you are Holding back as much as my heart would allow Thought I could show you how to live And now i'm drifting off off but I've gotten this far thinking please kill me now how I hate the fact that I'm such a liar thinking I'm broken and you won't save me now maybe I don't want to learn how to live C'mon...would it really be that bad? C'mon...would it really be that bad? You know...didn't I promise I wouldn't be mad? C'mon...would it really be that bad? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 24 [informant] => iluvpencils [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
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