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Writing away my pain.
My creative words can't stop,
The overflowing rain.

My words can't match the truth,
I could never tell you how I feel.
No matter how I describe it,
To you this hurt could never be real.

The grip of my pen,
The flow of the ink.
Writings on the wall,
And I continue to sink.

I lie alone at night,
Wondering if I'm the only one.
If there's anyone like me,
Who's in the shadow away from the sun.

The doctors try to help me,
But I know there's no cure.
I'm God's damned abomination,
I'm tainted with sin, so unpure.

None can seem to grasp,
The true hurt of my soul.
No one even tries,
To help me gain control.

So with this pen and paper,
I scrible down my pain.
Maybe oneday I'll explain it right,
And I'll no longer bear the stain.
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With this Pen and Paper

Contributed by Pats4eva7 on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:20:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I could sit up all night,
Writing away my pain.
My creative words can't stop,
The overflowing rain.

My words can't match the truth,
I could never tell you how I feel.
No matter how I describe it,
To you this hurt could never be real.

The grip of my pen,
The flow of the ink.
Writings on the wall,
And I continue to sink.

I lie alone at night,
Wondering if I'm the only one.
If there's anyone like me,
Who's in the shadow away from the sun.

The doctors try to help me,
But I know there's no cure.
I'm God's damned abomination,
I'm tainted with sin, so unpure.

None can seem to grasp,
The true hurt of my soul.
No one even tries,
To help me gain control.

So with this pen and paper,
I scrible down my pain.
Maybe oneday I'll explain it right,
And I'll no longer bear the stain.

Copyright © Pats4eva7 ... [ 2005-04-26 20:20:46]
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Re: With this Pen and Paper (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:45:26 PM AEST
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ahhh man, this is briliant, this is just plain touching i can feel your anguish so clearly with this poem, this is a very good write.

SM

P.S. writeing may not be the cure but it will help ease the pain so keep em' comeing

Re: With this Pen and Paper (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:12:06 PM AEST
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aww absolutely excellent poem. well done
& u are not the only one who feels dark inside i can relate to this so much and also feel writing poetry is a release of my pain. but ur right it never makes me feel better
anyway great poem & hope to u

Re: With this Pen and Paper (User Rating: 1 )
by kareless on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:32:57 AM AEST
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Very good poem, well felt...like verbose in words as sensitive to touch...and all that keeps us alive, eats us alive.

Never stop feeling and doing what you do! ;)

K

Re: With this Pen and Paper (User Rating: 1 )
by Kiira on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:27:15 PM AEST
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Good Job!!

Re: With this Pen and Paper (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 01:08:43 AM AEST
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very nicely done!

wiz

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