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in everything i do wrong you've had a say
my friends, my music, you've taken my life
you've blamed me for everything, even the knife
i dont care what you think or what you feel
everything i've ever loved you had to steal
now i've nothing left, i'm left empty and alone
i cannot live in this house thats not a home
forgive me, forget me, do whatever you please
you take my life with such pleasure and ease
but slowly, and surely, you let the knife sink in
you're making sure i dont get out of this
but if you will not end it ill be more than happy to
i'll live not one more day in a house ruled by you
i HATE you, despise you, wish to be gone
i will run away, will you miss me for long?
hand over the knife, i'll do it myself
i cant stand this place, rather spend eternity in hell
but either way im leaving you now
we've lost it all and cant fix it somehow
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Title-less (anger filled emotions)

Contributed by blue_angel on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 08:47:20 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

everything important to me you've taken away
in everything i do wrong you've had a say
my friends, my music, you've taken my life
you've blamed me for everything, even the knife
i dont care what you think or what you feel
everything i've ever loved you had to steal
now i've nothing left, i'm left empty and alone
i cannot live in this house thats not a home
forgive me, forget me, do whatever you please
you take my life with such pleasure and ease
but slowly, and surely, you let the knife sink in
you're making sure i dont get out of this
but if you will not end it ill be more than happy to
i'll live not one more day in a house ruled by you
i HATE you, despise you, wish to be gone
i will run away, will you miss me for long?
hand over the knife, i'll do it myself
i cant stand this place, rather spend eternity in hell
but either way im leaving you now
we've lost it all and cant fix it somehow

Copyright © blue_angel ... [ 2005-04-25 20:47:20]
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Re: Title-less (anger filled emotions) (User Rating: 1 )
by meganmartin_21 on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 09:03:41 PM AEST
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I think thats a great poem All I have to say is I hope you feel better about your life, somebody hasta care, Just hang in there. Everyone has a purpose, but i know how you feel i've felt the same, and i got through it so just hang in there. lotz of luv~Megan

Re: Title-less (anger filled emotions) (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 09:06:31 PM AEST
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wow! where to begin: a very powerful, emotional piece. do not be quick to action, you have at least one friend left. think things through, my email is always open.

The Voice

Re: Title-less (anger filled emotions) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 05:37:22 AM AEST
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Wow. Such powerful expression. We've all felt this way about those who lord authority over us, but you captured and harnessed that rage. (Note to those who run this site: Consider a book with all of Jennie's poetry in it; I would buy it). Anyway, please consider all of your options. I know that you would like to just wipe that slate clean and push all the pain away, but a long term solution will take something more, and while I hate to advise more short term suffering, there is light at the end of the tunnel and it doesn't have to be a freight train.

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