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Array ( [sid] => 91995 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => pain [time] => 2005-04-23 13:19:55 [hometext] => this poem was written after i found out about what my ex was sayin about me...it really hurt me...so i thought i would sit down and write a poem... [bodytext] => All this pain you put me through
This love this hate I cannot take
I once was lost, but I found you
You made me feel visible
But now it’s like im invisible
But you let me go
And now I don’t know
These tears I shed
This love I spread
I tell myself day after day
Hes just a boy
He treats me like a toy
I tell my mom I love this boy
He gives me joy and laughter
All this pain you put me through
Should I forgive?
Or should I forget
You made me lie
You made me cry
Now im lonely
And I don’t know why
I feel unloved
I feel betrayed
All I want is happiness
My heart bleeds
I have more needs
I can’t take it anymore
Why do I take this from you?
I do not know
All this pain you put me through
You’ve made me cut
And now im a nut
You called me names
And now you’re playing games
You say one thing
And do another
All this pain you put me through
Day after day
Night after night
I lay thinking
Bout how stupid I was
How stupid I was to fall for u
All this pain you put me through
Im no longer sad
Im just mad
How could you do this?
It’s just not right
All this pain you put me through
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pain

Contributed by emobritt on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:19:55 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



All this pain you put me through
This love this hate I cannot take
I once was lost, but I found you
You made me feel visible
But now it’s like im invisible
But you let me go
And now I don’t know
These tears I shed
This love I spread
I tell myself day after day
Hes just a boy
He treats me like a toy
I tell my mom I love this boy
He gives me joy and laughter
All this pain you put me through
Should I forgive?
Or should I forget
You made me lie
You made me cry
Now im lonely
And I don’t know why
I feel unloved
I feel betrayed
All I want is happiness
My heart bleeds
I have more needs
I can’t take it anymore
Why do I take this from you?
I do not know
All this pain you put me through
You’ve made me cut
And now im a nut
You called me names
And now you’re playing games
You say one thing
And do another
All this pain you put me through
Day after day
Night after night
I lay thinking
Bout how stupid I was
How stupid I was to fall for u
All this pain you put me through
Im no longer sad
Im just mad
How could you do this?
It’s just not right
All this pain you put me through




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Re: pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 02:43:26 PM AEST
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my boyfriend i have now is like that,he cheats on me i know he does i have proof,but he will never admit it,i love him so much,and he hurts me even more,but i cant ***** him off 'coz i just cant,i need to be stronger and let my emotions show a little like you have done here this was a very emotional write thanks love han xxx


Re: pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 02:13:04 AM AEST
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Its too bad people get treated like that, but I guess its the way life goes... Nicely written poem though.




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