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Array ( [sid] => 9195 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Doctors [time] => 2002-12-24 22:00:00 [hometext] => On my third admission to hospital, doctors, programs, I dunno, does it work? [bodytext] => They took me to the doctor,
They said he would be nice,
They told me he would help me
They said he’d give advice.

I believed what I was told,
For my mummy never lies,
Instead I should have searched
For the truth hid in her eyes.

I wondered why she got upset
But I never really thought
That maybe I didn’t act
In the way that good girls ought.

She was crying when she left me,
I begged for her to stay,
But the doctors wouldn’t let her,
They made her go away.

The doctors looked me over,
They prodded at my side,
They did all sorts of tests on me
Till I very nearly cried.

They said if I behaved
And did what I was told,
Then I could have a blanket
Instead of being cold.

After that, if I was good
And ate all that’s on my plate,
Then maybe I could watch TV,
Or talk to my best mate.

And if I really tried
And worked with all my might,
Perhaps then would let me
Have a visitor one night.

But eating wasn’t easy,
I just couldn’t life my fork,
So they wouldn’t let me move,
I couldn’t even walk.

They put me in a wheel chair,
But still the food was bad,
I couldn’t sleep at all
When I counted what I’d had.

They wanted me to eat too much,
They watched me growing fat,
I don’t supposed they cared though,
They’re not much good at that.

Finally they released me,
Expecting me to fly,
But like a bird that’s wounded,
I fell straight out ‘ the sky.

I landed back amongst them,
In the hospital’s sterile nest,
They said I needed feeding,
They said I needed rest.

Again they saw me growing,
Tripling in size,
Ballooning to a monster
Right before their eyes.

Strangely though, they liked this,
They thought it made me right,
They never saw the desperation
Cried alone at night.

Once more they tried to free me,
Once more I had a try,
But birds with broken wings
Simply cannot fly.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Ami_and_me [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The Doctors

Contributed by Ami_and_me on Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



They took me to the doctor,
They said he would be nice,
They told me he would help me
They said he’d give advice.

I believed what I was told,
For my mummy never lies,
Instead I should have searched
For the truth hid in her eyes.

I wondered why she got upset
But I never really thought
That maybe I didn’t act
In the way that good girls ought.

She was crying when she left me,
I begged for her to stay,
But the doctors wouldn’t let her,
They made her go away.

The doctors looked me over,
They prodded at my side,
They did all sorts of tests on me
Till I very nearly cried.

They said if I behaved
And did what I was told,
Then I could have a blanket
Instead of being cold.

After that, if I was good
And ate all that’s on my plate,
Then maybe I could watch TV,
Or talk to my best mate.

And if I really tried
And worked with all my might,
Perhaps then would let me
Have a visitor one night.

But eating wasn’t easy,
I just couldn’t life my fork,
So they wouldn’t let me move,
I couldn’t even walk.

They put me in a wheel chair,
But still the food was bad,
I couldn’t sleep at all
When I counted what I’d had.

They wanted me to eat too much,
They watched me growing fat,
I don’t supposed they cared though,
They’re not much good at that.

Finally they released me,
Expecting me to fly,
But like a bird that’s wounded,
I fell straight out ‘ the sky.

I landed back amongst them,
In the hospital’s sterile nest,
They said I needed feeding,
They said I needed rest.

Again they saw me growing,
Tripling in size,
Ballooning to a monster
Right before their eyes.

Strangely though, they liked this,
They thought it made me right,
They never saw the desperation
Cried alone at night.

Once more they tried to free me,
Once more I had a try,
But birds with broken wings
Simply cannot fly.




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Re: The Doctors (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 04:05:55 AM AEST
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So sad and touching. I liked it...it was real.


Re: The Doctors (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 06:20:01 AM AEST
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sorry to hear that , it was very touching....
hope u get better soon , i liked most ur last stanza :)


Re: The Doctors (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 08:20:24 PM AEST
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That is a very sad write and a very serious matter to be dealing with in the hospital like this....i know there are people out there with this that they have to deal with it....i hope you get better my friend....this is very sad.....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.




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