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Shadows Of Paranoia
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 01:04:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Illusions thrill
sensations kill
love the way it feels
lets do it all night
but there's something strange
about the way
this distortion feels
It's to nice.
It's so Insane
I laugh while I cry
sleep in the day awake all night
love is a need
I get it and then I flee,
It's so Insane
don't know what to do
so torn and confused
I pause and I freeze...
So beautiful
just like I dreamed
loves oh so sweet
wanna do it all night,
the thrill it kills
I have no will
but I can see
somethings not right.
I think it's time for me to leave
so emotionally twisted
I almost believe
there's a place for me,
I scream I shout I stomp I pout
release me now
oh please let me out.
Don't know what to do
I'm so torn and confused
I want what I don't need
get to close and I flee,
sensational is the feel
when love is real
but
I pause and I freeze....
something's in the shadows smirking.
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secretwind
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2005-04-17 13:04:12]
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Re: Shadows Of Paranoia
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:12:30 PM AEST
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I really loved the title and I can really relate to
the confusion portrayed in this poem
especially in regards to love. I thought this
was a very honest well-written poem.
Continue writing hopefully you will find the
answers to your confusion within your writing.
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Re: Shadows Of Paranoia
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 03:59:39 AM AEST
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Very sad but great writing as always.
I know the feelings.
huggs,
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