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Array ( [sid] => 91246 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => only you could... [time] => 2005-04-17 05:31:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You warmed up my arctic nights and breezed my damp days
You enlivened my inert life
You made the impossible possible and the improbable probable
You turned my doubts into hope
You taught me to trust and to be believed
You turned the jinx into the genie
You made the sour taste sweet
You turned failure into triumph
Your love is ubiquitous
You were God's best creation
My most priced possesion

The rains are so unexciting without you
Living makes no sense to me
Time has never been so stagnant
And each day seems endless
I think of you all the time
This desertion is such a pain
I'm wanting to be with you
But all in vain

An involuntary existence mine is
My soul feels evacuated
My patience is saturated
So terrible is this feeling
That my heart calls for some healing


I've never felt so wrecked before!
You've gotten me so used to us that
I can't bear be away
I try to numb the pain
By diving into an ocean of memories
And this hurts even more,nevertheless!

is there no way out of this...is there no one to help?

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 22 [informant] => keerthy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
only you could...

Contributed by keerthy on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 05:31:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You warmed up my arctic nights and breezed my damp days
You enlivened my inert life
You made the impossible possible and the improbable probable
You turned my doubts into hope
You taught me to trust and to be believed
You turned the jinx into the genie
You made the sour taste sweet
You turned failure into triumph
Your love is ubiquitous
You were God's best creation
My most priced possesion

The rains are so unexciting without you
Living makes no sense to me
Time has never been so stagnant
And each day seems endless
I think of you all the time
This desertion is such a pain
I'm wanting to be with you
But all in vain

An involuntary existence mine is
My soul feels evacuated
My patience is saturated
So terrible is this feeling
That my heart calls for some healing


I've never felt so wrecked before!
You've gotten me so used to us that
I can't bear be away
I try to numb the pain
By diving into an ocean of memories
And this hurts even more,nevertheless!

is there no way out of this...is there no one to help?





Copyright © keerthy ... [ 2005-04-17 05:31:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: only you could... (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 06:10:16 AM AEST
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wow im soo sorry. wat a sad poem and i kno exactly how u feel! this poem touched my heart and i know the pain u r feeling..i have just posted some poetry along the same lines as urs
wow tho this realli did touch my heart


Re: only you could... (User Rating: 1 )
by reflections on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 08:06:53 AM AEST
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Run, don’t walk, back into the presence of this lost love of your life. Take a copy of this poem for your lost love’s reading pleasure. If after reading this touching documentation of your feelings of distress and overwhelming loss, your lost love does not return . . . LET GO . . . and get someone who appreciates your presence in their life.

A really good write.

John


Re: only you could... (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 12:44:43 PM AEST
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Another good work and welcome to the site. I’m new here as well but I love the site. Its great to get my thoughts out weather people like them or not. Keep writing and I’ll keep reading…..Steve


Re: only you could... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 02:44:20 PM AEST
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A masterpeice **********

Dorian Chambers




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