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Your legs quiver body trembling and glistening

from the night of passion as my mind searches for the answers

of the questions not yet asked.

Was that me in her mind or someone better then me? Was that real, Will she be there for me? But is it me she really wants.

Am I Dreaming? What if I don't wake up from this dream or worse I wake up and there is nothing or no one around to listen to all the things I have to say or be there for the things I do.

Will I be punished for the things I have done in my life or the things I have not done in my life.

Maybe I have done all that was expected of me.

Was it enough probably not Will it ever be enough?

What should I do? No don't tell me I know

I must be crazy right? Go ahead say it to may face I can take it

I have my whole life.

So I'm not perfect Who is?

You can't hate me for who I am But most people do

Is it fair ?



Adam Douglas Witt

Copyright ©2004 Adam Douglas Witt
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ENOUGH

Contributed by wittsworks on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 03:22:05 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems




Your legs quiver body trembling and glistening

from the night of passion as my mind searches for the answers

of the questions not yet asked.

Was that me in her mind or someone better then me? Was that real, Will she be there for me? But is it me she really wants.

Am I Dreaming? What if I don't wake up from this dream or worse I wake up and there is nothing or no one around to listen to all the things I have to say or be there for the things I do.

Will I be punished for the things I have done in my life or the things I have not done in my life.

Maybe I have done all that was expected of me.

Was it enough probably not Will it ever be enough?

What should I do? No don't tell me I know

I must be crazy right? Go ahead say it to may face I can take it

I have my whole life.

So I'm not perfect Who is?

You can't hate me for who I am But most people do

Is it fair ?



Adam Douglas Witt

Copyright ©2004 Adam Douglas Witt




Copyright © wittsworks ... [ 2005-04-17 03:22:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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