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Not through one shed tear
I Guess you never really care
Cause you where never there

I needed you to understand
Instead i recieve another command
Telling me what i am,
What i cant be
Why cant you see me?

You dont know all the pain i went through
How i wished i could talk to you
Like i still do
Now we will never be the same
Im not to blame

Of all the things a mother should be
You've never been any of those to me
Look at what i have became
This part of me will never change

I sit all day alone in my room
Not doing what you assume
In that sanctuary of mine
Im usually in my bed crying
Thinking of you and everything you've said
All you words playing over and over in my head

You know im not happy, though you dont do a thing
Your so afraid of me commiting suicide
Cause ive tried before, and act like i did then
You know whats wrong, but wont take away the pain
Why?
Why do you let me hurt, when you know how to fix it
You think its for my own good,
That it will save me, cure me,
Cure me of my homosexuality

I know its something you will always hate
Im sorry, but now its too late
A part of me will forever ache,
Of that emptyness,
Of feeling motherless [comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 48 [informant] => willow_tara72002 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Without A Mother

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:00:44 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You've never been here
Not through one shed tear
I Guess you never really care
Cause you where never there

I needed you to understand
Instead i recieve another command
Telling me what i am,
What i cant be
Why cant you see me?

You dont know all the pain i went through
How i wished i could talk to you
Like i still do
Now we will never be the same
Im not to blame

Of all the things a mother should be
You've never been any of those to me
Look at what i have became
This part of me will never change

I sit all day alone in my room
Not doing what you assume
In that sanctuary of mine
Im usually in my bed crying
Thinking of you and everything you've said
All you words playing over and over in my head

You know im not happy, though you dont do a thing
Your so afraid of me commiting suicide
Cause ive tried before, and act like i did then
You know whats wrong, but wont take away the pain
Why?
Why do you let me hurt, when you know how to fix it
You think its for my own good,
That it will save me, cure me,
Cure me of my homosexuality

I know its something you will always hate
Im sorry, but now its too late
A part of me will forever ache,
Of that emptyness,
Of feeling motherless

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2005-04-16 23:00:44]
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Re: Without A Mother (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:15:52 PM AEST
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This is a very sad, gut wrenching write but it's written well.
A mother is suppose to have un-conditional luv for her children not kick them in the heart.
Don't know how old u r but someday u can get away from the negativity just think on that and hang in there.
It's so sad to me to see that a parent can't accept their children as is.
Luv, huggs, prayer,
emy
p.m. me any time. i would never judge u. Not intentionally any way.

Re: Without A Mother (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 06:41:38 AM AEST
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without a mother....I feel the hurt....
I hope she can read this and maybe then just maybe your mother might finally be a mother??
and help you with your problems....
cheers!~

Re: Without A Mother (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 02:13:56 AM AEST
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you should let her read this...even if nothing changes atleast she would know how you really feel..

Re: Without A Mother (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 08:19:46 PM AEST
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filled with such emotion...loved it

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