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I can no longer live within all this wrath
Too many times have I felt compelled to death
So long have I coveted for my final breath
An eternity in hell cant be worse than life here
So release my last breath, shed my last tear
In this world I have nothing left to give
In this life I have nothing left to live
And so for you I have a few last words
Thanks for making me live in this curse
Now on the other side I will await
Thank you for making my death my life’s fate
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last words

Contributed by blue_angel on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:51:30 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

A final decision has crossed my path
I can no longer live within all this wrath
Too many times have I felt compelled to death
So long have I coveted for my final breath
An eternity in hell cant be worse than life here
So release my last breath, shed my last tear
In this world I have nothing left to give
In this life I have nothing left to live
And so for you I have a few last words
Thanks for making me live in this curse
Now on the other side I will await
Thank you for making my death my life’s fate

Copyright Â© blue_angel ... [ 2005-04-16 21:51:30]
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Re: last words (User Rating: 1 )
by sweet_lil_b2003 on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:57:47 PM AEST
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hey damn hats heartfelt I feel what your feeling in this write. But hey dont do anything stupid babyy. I care i love ya.. Crystal

Re: last words (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:57:50 PM AEST
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NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! JENNY IF U EVER LEFT I WOULD BE STUCK IN THE WORST HELL YOU COULD EVER IMAGINE U R THE REASON THAT I AM STILL HERE AND PLEASE DONT LEAVE ME ALONE. W/O U I AM NOTHING TO NEBODY. NOT EVEN MYSELF I NEED YOU TO STAY PLEASE DONT EVER LEAVE ME ALONE, I'M AFRAID OF WHAT i WILL DO
STAY

Re: last words (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:24:50 PM AEST
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brilliant poem. a brilliant artist like yourself should never die, because then the world is no longer blessed with all of your talent.

Re: last words (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:50:38 PM AEST
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it's a good poem, but you can never leave us, blue angel. oh yes, this is my name now. but never leave us- you are one of my BEST friends. don't leave me alone in this world made of hell.

Re: last words (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 04:37:09 AM AEST
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Another heartfelt program on a tragic life. Do I need to repeat what these other comments say? Of course! So many of us would miss you.

My heart yells loudly
this I can say
that if you were gone
we'd miss you each day

You really don't know it
But you're a gal nice and kind
so I have to plead
don't leave us behind

One who writes well
with feeling so deep
is one who touched us
that we want to keep

So this little poem
must end here tonite
Stay with us you should
and continue to write

Re: last words (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 05:55:36 AM AEST
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*hoping these arn't your last words as I want to read more of your poems blue_angel*

Inoc

Re: last words (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 02:15:23 AM AEST
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you have so much talent ..

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