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Array ( [sid] => 91176 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mindless Fox [time] => 2005-04-16 13:19:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Looking outside,
Picking my group for a ride.
Living a life knowing how sad I'll be,
Pleasing their mind for nobodies like me.
Step away from the group that pulls you in,
Dont think the line between is really thin.
Becoming brainless & opinionless.

Theres no wrong or right,
There'll never be a reason for fight.
Step out the room where you hide,
Open your eyes & see the bright light,
See your friends with a different sight.
Can you hear the pretty sounds,
Of lonely people drinking rounds.
So can you look this way,
Can you feel the vibe of wha I say.

Get away,
Run away.
Your free to go if you escape it.
Run around,
Hiding down,
Nothing left if you join it.

A mindless box,
A mindless fox.
Is what will be,
Melting my brain,
Say Im insane.
But thats who I'l be.
Can I hear an opinion,
Can I hear an opinion of what you think.

Did you lose,
Did you snooze & flush your brains down the sink.
Classify others & my life,
For entertainment,
Classify yourself as a perfect life,
without regretment.
Live a joke,
Live a toke,
of sanity.
Point fingers & make a joke,
Dont be small minded & open your mind,
Open your mind for many things. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Ranchan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Mindless Fox

Contributed by Ranchan on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 01:19:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Looking outside,
Picking my group for a ride.
Living a life knowing how sad I'll be,
Pleasing their mind for nobodies like me.
Step away from the group that pulls you in,
Dont think the line between is really thin.
Becoming brainless & opinionless.

Theres no wrong or right,
There'll never be a reason for fight.
Step out the room where you hide,
Open your eyes & see the bright light,
See your friends with a different sight.
Can you hear the pretty sounds,
Of lonely people drinking rounds.
So can you look this way,
Can you feel the vibe of wha I say.

Get away,
Run away.
Your free to go if you escape it.
Run around,
Hiding down,
Nothing left if you join it.

A mindless box,
A mindless fox.
Is what will be,
Melting my brain,
Say Im insane.
But thats who I'l be.
Can I hear an opinion,
Can I hear an opinion of what you think.

Did you lose,
Did you snooze & flush your brains down the sink.
Classify others & my life,
For entertainment,
Classify yourself as a perfect life,
without regretment.
Live a joke,
Live a toke,
of sanity.
Point fingers & make a joke,
Dont be small minded & open your mind,
Open your mind for many things.

Copyright © Ranchan ... [ 2005-04-16 13:19:16]
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Re: Mindless Fox (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 01:29:20 PM AEST
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Really great write. Good word description and Wow just mind blowing. Good work

Whisper

Re: Mindless Fox (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 03:30:44 PM AEST
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This is excellent writting, way cool.

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