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[sid] => 91014
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[aid] => mick
[title] => HIM
[time] => 2005-04-14 23:15:00
[hometext] => Hey i havent written a poem in a while and i just wrote this and i would like everyones opinion on it i know its long but just read it plz comment
[bodytext] => Memories trickling down, The memories of him and me, Making my life wonderful, Tears of joy roll down my face, Its amazing how i feel when i'm around him, The day i met him was it to burn forever? He talks so kindly, his eyes and mine are connected, When i look deeper into his eyes i know he really loves me, I have never met anyone who made my face shine, He's the only person that i ever felt so strongly about, I cant put aside how i feel, I love his voice, i love his smile, his laugh sooths me, I'd give away my soul just to kiss him once, I've told him everything, the truth of my feelings my past, he's what i hold closest to my heart, yet i lost him so fast. I cryed for dayz hoping my heart would heal, i was trying to hold back my tears, He has my whole heart, Because being without him was one of my biggest fears, How can you love someone so much it hurts? I cant do this without him, I didnt want this to end, When one month came i new i wouldnt love anyone the same, Without his love, his kiss, his touch, No more will i trust, Know matter what i do i'll never be me again. As time goes by i hope he'll see he meant the world to me, Why am i so empty? Why am i so different? There's something missing inside me, He reached inside me until he found my heart, I miss the way he loved me, I'm so in love with what we used to be. He'll never know how much i loved him, I thought he was different from all the others, Now i am here with tears, And overwhelming sense of nothingness, I know i'm suppost to be with him, But we dont know each others true feelings, How can people today just turn there backs on someone they love? I just wish he could see the tears upon my pillow at night, There is no use if i cant have him, I will find myself still wishing for him, The only reason i am here is because of you, The year has changed him into someone else, I'm sitting crying and he's having fun, I thought he truly loved me, When i look into my eyes i see the pain he has caused me, Even after he broke my heart i think we are meant to be. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 25 [informant] => forgottenone_iam [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
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