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Array ( [sid] => 90993 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just For You [time] => 2005-04-14 20:16:51 [hometext] => One of my more sad works about losing a love [bodytext] => Same story, young and alone
Except wiser now, and more on my own
A cry in the night, same old shot in the dark
The bullet flies blindly to match my own heart

That screams louder than a gun
Still not loud enough for you,
To penetrate your heart
Like only a true love could

And I’m not that desperate
No, I never really was
But losing is a hobby
And I’d like to quit the club

If I had my way
I would tear my heart in two
To give me back my life
So I could forget about you

And there are so many things
I’d like to say to you
But there’s nothing more to hear
I’ve already killed the mood

So this is for everyone, who feels the way I do
A silent realization, that someone else feels like you too
And I hope this poem can offer hope,
For what you’re going through
Because there’s nothing worse than loving someone
And knowing they don’t love you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 22 [informant] => xsitm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Just For You

Contributed by xsitm on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:16:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Same story, young and alone
Except wiser now, and more on my own
A cry in the night, same old shot in the dark
The bullet flies blindly to match my own heart

That screams louder than a gun
Still not loud enough for you,
To penetrate your heart
Like only a true love could

And I’m not that desperate
No, I never really was
But losing is a hobby
And I’d like to quit the club

If I had my way
I would tear my heart in two
To give me back my life
So I could forget about you

And there are so many things
I’d like to say to you
But there’s nothing more to hear
I’ve already killed the mood

So this is for everyone, who feels the way I do
A silent realization, that someone else feels like you too
And I hope this poem can offer hope,
For what you’re going through
Because there’s nothing worse than loving someone
And knowing they don’t love you

Copyright Â© xsitm ... [ 2005-04-14 20:16:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Just For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Pats4eva7 on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:00:09 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this poem, it really hit home. I know what you're going through because Ive felt like that not once, but twice and it sucks! And one of those times was 2 weeks ago and im still hurting! Godo write
*melyssa*

Re: Just For You (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:42:56 PM AEST
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wow..thanku soo much
omg i cried when reading this becaus yea ive lost someone well a few months back now but the pain is still so real
i think about him every night and cry myself to sleep and sometimes i feel like just dying..all my poetry is pretty much about him
anyway it was a gd write n i hope u r ok

Re: Just For You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 04:15:21 AM AEST
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Very sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy

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