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Array ( [sid] => 90914 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Permanent Dreams [time] => 2005-04-14 06:18:36 [hometext] => [a quick try] [bodytext] => One at a time, the bodies, they drop,
the fall and they fall, they hit solid rock.
They bleed their red seas, ooze organ streams,
gurgle with pride in permanent dreams.
The fallen are free, the living, they cue,
to take that one leap and make this life through.
Eager they stand, pushing, they shove,
all longing, all craving to fall from above.
They evny the dead, they all wish to rot,
they wait their whole lifes to reach that cliff top.
Poor are the children, they've longest to stand,
but not all is lost for help is at hand.
The innocent get chance to cut through the line,
they're made to fall back, first broken's the spine.
They reach glory dreams, forever they sing,
with joy for the chance that death it may bring.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 13 [informant] => deleterious_dislike [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Permanent Dreams

Contributed by deleterious_dislike on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 06:18:36 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

One at a time, the bodies, they drop,
the fall and they fall, they hit solid rock.
They bleed their red seas, ooze organ streams,
gurgle with pride in permanent dreams.
The fallen are free, the living, they cue,
to take that one leap and make this life through.
Eager they stand, pushing, they shove,
all longing, all craving to fall from above.
They evny the dead, they all wish to rot,
they wait their whole lifes to reach that cliff top.
Poor are the children, they've longest to stand,
but not all is lost for help is at hand.
The innocent get chance to cut through the line,
they're made to fall back, first broken's the spine.
They reach glory dreams, forever they sing,
with joy for the chance that death it may bring.

Copyright © deleterious_dislike ... [ 2005-04-14 06:18:36]
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Re: Permanent Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:54:54 AM AEST
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good r&r. good to read your stuff again, you've got a really original style.
"They evny the dead, they all wish to rot,
they wait their whole lifes to reach that cliff top."

that was my fave bit x

Re: Permanent Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 04:57:13 PM AEST
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i like dark poetry, and this was definitely a great one

it has great meaning to it...i love it!

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