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Like you don't have a care
Why won't you talk with me nicely?
You just turn the other cheek
Am I just invisible?
I try and be nice to you
Is a friendship even possible?
This uneasiness is taking over
I hope you don't have a hidden grudge
What have I ever done to you?
Are you really so quick to judge?
I give you a nudge, and you don't even budge
I want to know if you have a problem with me
Why didn't you tell me you don't like me?
I don't want you to hide stuff from me, can't you see?
How this affects my emotions deeply
I want to know you better
Since we may be mutual friends
I wanted to write you this letter
I want us to put problems aside
I doubt you know the first thing about me
I don't know much about you
But once you see, how I can be
A loyal and true friend to you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 65 [informant] => smiley_jennyxoxo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Why Me?

Contributed by smiley_jennyxoxo on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:56:06 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

You have been treating me coldly
Like you don't have a care
Why won't you talk with me nicely?
You just turn the other cheek
Am I just invisible?
I try and be nice to you
Is a friendship even possible?
This uneasiness is taking over
I hope you don't have a hidden grudge
What have I ever done to you?
Are you really so quick to judge?
I give you a nudge, and you don't even budge
I want to know if you have a problem with me
Why didn't you tell me you don't like me?
I don't want you to hide stuff from me, can't you see?
How this affects my emotions deeply
I want to know you better
Since we may be mutual friends
I wanted to write you this letter
I want us to put problems aside
I doubt you know the first thing about me
I don't know much about you
But once you see, how I can be
A loyal and true friend to you

Copyright © smiley_jennyxoxo ... [ 2005-04-14 00:56:06]
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Re: Why Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by static_fury on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 01:08:29 AM AEST
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I dont mean to be mean, but i had a simluar conversation with my best friend old gf......some advice it probably because some how your taking way from their relationship...:S

Re: Why Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 01:36:37 AM AEST
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This is a good poem. It's deep with emotions.
It flows nicely hough there is not much of a rhyme scheme... more like maybe a free verse. But it's good.
I hope everything works out for u and this person. It's like being stuck btween a rock and a hard place. I've been there and done that! Take care. Love... hugs...
~Donna~

Re: Why Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Naveen on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:31:36 AM AEST
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I have forwarded your poem to one of my friend, whom want to express the same feeling she kept on ignoring me Am i Invisible.

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