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Array ( [sid] => 90845 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I Should Die Before You Wake... [time] => 2005-04-13 16:48:29 [hometext] => PLEASE comment! :) And I will comment on yours as well, of course. It's short this time, take it while you can get it... [bodytext] => If I should die
Before you wake
I pray to you
My soul to take

You'd do to my soul
What you did to me, my "mother" dear
Mutilate and abuse me
And then hold me gently, seeming so sincere

But I have no one left to rely on
If I stop believing in you
And so you I will always love
No matter what you do [comments] => 4 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 65 [informant] => NightOwl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

If I Should Die Before You Wake...

Contributed by NightOwl on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 04:48:29 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

If I should die
Before you wake
I pray to you
My soul to take

You'd do to my soul
What you did to me, my "mother" dear
Mutilate and abuse me
And then hold me gently, seeming so sincere

But I have no one left to rely on
If I stop believing in you
And so you I will always love
No matter what you do

Copyright © NightOwl ... [ 2005-04-13 16:48:29]
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Re: If I Should Die Before You Wake... (User Rating: 1 )
by Pats4eva7 on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 05:00:48 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this write, it was short but it got a point across and what a pint you made. Keep writing
*melyssa*

Re: If I Should Die Before You Wake... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-Kay on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 07:09:56 PM AEST
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Great write, well expressed, yes short but a lot is explained in such short words well written keep up the good work.

Kay-Kay

Re: If I Should Die Before You Wake... (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 10:41:21 PM AEST
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good write, i especially liked the last two stanzas. Believing is hard sometimes, but it's unaviodable at times.

Re: If I Should Die Before You Wake... (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 11:40:07 PM AEST
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Short, but to the point. A very well portrayed and written poem. Alot explained in so little words. Well done.
Hugs,
~Sue~

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