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[aid] => mick
[title] => Eye of the Storm
[time] => 2005-04-12 23:52:18
[hometext] => Constructive comments on what i can improve on would be greatly appreciated!
[bodytext] => Storm clouds waken and stir over the mountains, slowly spreading their fury across the sky. They ascend, the fire of the evening sun smothering its smoke into a blanket over the blue. Electricity crackles, and ripples through the air to make the grass below stand alert, on guard. Snowy peaks pierce through the cloud to reach heaven, and in their shadow, the grassy knolls part way for a thin stream that winds through the rock to fall into the still waters of the lagoon. I drink in this vision, as I follow my path to the water’s edge. A few last ribbons of gossamer sunlight stream through the cloud breaks. The earth, air, water, and I glory in the glow of the fading light. Soon, we know, the storm will come. But in the eye, we are held Divine. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 30 [informant] => sarahgordon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
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