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My frozen heart has felt nothing,
But the absence of everything,
I tried to fill the void with blood,
But there was never enough.

All of the tears that were cried
Slowly tore me apart inside.
Yet, I still feel the nothingness
In this misery of emptiness.

My frozen heart cannot even feel
Your love, even if it's truly real.
I just feel the nothing I cannot have,
And it isn't even sad. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Bleeding Heart of Ice

Contributed by essentially9 on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:41:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Bleeding Heart of Ice

My frozen heart has felt nothing,
But the absence of everything,
I tried to fill the void with blood,
But there was never enough.

All of the tears that were cried
Slowly tore me apart inside.
Yet, I still feel the nothingness
In this misery of emptiness.

My frozen heart cannot even feel
Your love, even if it's truly real.
I just feel the nothing I cannot have,
And it isn't even sad.

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-04-12 21:41:56]
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Re: Bleeding Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:44:17 PM AEST
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Very nicely written. Full of the pain of being dead inside. I know this feeling well. Good write.

Re: Bleeding Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:49:20 PM AEST
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Jen...you can accomplish whatever you want, because if you didnt you would be sad...you have "perfectionism"...and it always shows...so no bs next time...kay...lol
Great write as ALWAYS....

Clark=]

Re: Bleeding Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 10:38:45 PM AEST
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So sad but written well as always.
I figure if u can still cry then u feel much more than u think. When one can't cry is when they should be concerned. I know this one from experience.
You're a great writer so please hang tuff.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Bleeding Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 12:10:58 AM AEST
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Great write!! I have battled those feelings and lack of feelings as well , Thankyou for sharing this

Hugs
Leia

Re: Bleeding Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 01:25:04 AM AEST
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Oh ..its truly freezing..perfect feeling of nothingness sweeps in ;-)venkat

Re: Bleeding Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 09:04:58 PM AEST
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this was sheer brilliant. this flowed SO easily, im just plain amazed by this write. again, the ending was truly strong and magnificent. im running out of words to describe your work, im so repetitive here :P the very last line i think most of all blew me away. "And it isnt even sad." that seemed so honest and it seemed like the sort of conclusion that i simply always seem to get from your writes. truly amazing write. this is probably one of my favorite poems by you. just....wow.

Re: Bleeding Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 12:09:01 AM AEST
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Amazing write. It gave me goosebumps. Incredible work, as always.

Re: Bleeding Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by applehead on Sunday, 11th December 2011 @ 11:04:47 PM AEST
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I think most can relate too that. Liked it & cool title, thnks 4 sharing it

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