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Can you just throw it all away?
to find another girl
and give your heart away

It makes my insides churn
and my legs to grow weak
that you can give that all up
and replace me in a week

Will you grow to love her
the way that you loved me?
Brighten up her whole life
and fill her days with glee?

Our special day is coming
It will be here in two weeks
to you it's just another day
while my whole day is bleak

Will you remember?
or will you be with her?
Will you even care at all?
because that day will be our year [comments] => 5 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Breny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Questions

Contributed by Breny on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 08:52:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Did our love mean nothing?
Can you just throw it all away?
to find another girl
and give your heart away

It makes my insides churn
and my legs to grow weak
that you can give that all up
and replace me in a week

Will you grow to love her
the way that you loved me?
Brighten up her whole life
and fill her days with glee?

Our special day is coming
It will be here in two weeks
to you it's just another day
while my whole day is bleak

Will you remember?
or will you be with her?
Will you even care at all?
because that day will be our year

Copyright © Breny ... [ 2005-04-12 20:52:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Questions (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:08:00 PM AEST
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Did our love mean nothing?
Can you just throw it all away?
to find another girl
and give your heart away

i really loved this...

good write

Re: Questions (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:47:16 PM AEST
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Amazing... I loved it soo much. Its very sad. I'm sorry...
Lauren

Re: Questions (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:50:30 PM AEST
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Aww Brenna this is so sad. I'm so sorry for the hurt you're feeling. I commend u for being so brave as to write about it. Hang tuff my friend. May ur heart find the love that it deserves. A truly sad, but very well expressed poem. I'm here friend ok.
Hundreds of heartfelt hugs for u,
~Sue~

Re: Questions (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 01:06:25 AM AEST
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So sad. I'm sorry about what happened. Guys can be such heartless wreteches. You deserve better. Love is soooo special. Hang tough, girl.

I do need to rant on one thing (I am sorry): You say "a year doesn't seem that long to those of you that are married". Not true. Oh gods, not true. Married people can get divorces, and have their hearts torn apart at the wrong time (is there a right time)? If your parents (or other adults) are unsympathetic, or probably oblivious, I am so sorry (on behalf of adults). When we dismiss the feelings of others, we hurt people. I am sorry for your hurt.

Re: Questions (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 08:32:55 PM AEST
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What's that saying? Love stinks? Sometimes it does. Hope your heart heals soon. Great write though Bren. Chin up....your prince may be around the next corner.

Carol (Who has had her heart broken a few times as a grown up.)

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