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[aid] => mick
[title] => Clandestine
[time] => 2005-04-12 07:56:09
[hometext] => I am an amateur poet and constructive criticisms would be much appreciated. I'll do anything to improve. Thanks.
[bodytext] => Silently, He watched her… Her body glowing beneath the kiss Of the breaking dawn Rapt under a deep slumber Tangled sheets concealed her bareness but The untainted, innocent beauty Could not be masked The mist of passion lingered still Obscuring the view of truth and sense What is wrong when there is pleasure? What is right when there is pain? He breathed her scent and Her echoing moans filled his ears once more Skin against skin is ignescent… They are beginning to burn As the darkness of the night sheaths the sky He makes love to her in the moon’s dark side Though they seek more than just restricted bliss Forever they must remain… hidden [comments] => 2 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 2 [informant] => frustratedwitch [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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