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Array ( [sid] => 90621 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Left Alone through Suicide [time] => 2005-04-11 13:17:02 [hometext] => This is how I think I would feel if I lost my baby. She means so much to me. I love her with every inch of my essance. She truly is my only one and always will be the only one! I Love You Kim! [bodytext] => ---------------------________________-------------------------

I'm lost inside another crash
The bones I had, turned into ash.
The world did not cry, the night I died
And I am no good at suicide.

Beneath the rafters the angels sing
Spinning violence and playing with my heart.

My heart now it always breaks, the blood did drip and I did take,
another wish, another kiss, no more will for me.
We'd run away in our dismay, but please, come back to me.

Sorrow sank deep inside my blood
All the ones around me
I cared for and most of all I loved
But I can't see myself that way
Please don't forget me or cry when I'm away

Cry alone, I've gone away
No more nights, no more pain
I've gone alone, took all my strength
But I've made the change,
I won't see me tonight

So far away, I'm gone.
Please don't follow me tonight
An while I'm gone everything will be alright

No more breathe inside
Essence left my heart tonight
I just want to die, take away my life
lay by your side, please...

I can see just fine with you in my life,
there by my side as it starts to brighten
I know we are right, not stuck in a dream
Left alone through suicide...suicide [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Left Alone through Suicide

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 01:17:02 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



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I'm lost inside another crash
The bones I had, turned into ash.
The world did not cry, the night I died
And I am no good at suicide.

Beneath the rafters the angels sing
Spinning violence and playing with my heart.

My heart now it always breaks, the blood did drip and I did take,
another wish, another kiss, no more will for me.
We'd run away in our dismay, but please, come back to me.

Sorrow sank deep inside my blood
All the ones around me
I cared for and most of all I loved
But I can't see myself that way
Please don't forget me or cry when I'm away

Cry alone, I've gone away
No more nights, no more pain
I've gone alone, took all my strength
But I've made the change,
I won't see me tonight

So far away, I'm gone.
Please don't follow me tonight
An while I'm gone everything will be alright

No more breathe inside
Essence left my heart tonight
I just want to die, take away my life
lay by your side, please...

I can see just fine with you in my life,
there by my side as it starts to brighten
I know we are right, not stuck in a dream
Left alone through suicide...suicide




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Re: Left Alone through Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 01:24:08 PM AEST
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A very post- Romeo and Juliet themed write, with a modern ellegance and charm. This is not the typical love/sucicide poem that I am so used to reading. Those usually bore me, but something drew me to this piece, and once drawn I was captivated. I loved it.


Re: Left Alone through Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 03:57:14 AM AEST
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Wow, I certainly pray she never leaves u.
Great writing.
huggs,
emy




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