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[title] => Leaving is Loving - Quadruple Rictameter
[time] => 2005-04-09 16:40:11
[hometext] => Whosoever must leave and say good bye often knows what I am taling about
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Leaving
Means great heart ache
Airports, tarmac, tail lights,
Tight throats, misty eyes, - wave fare well!
Soldiers embrace loved ones to leave for war,
Mom, dad, honey ,please write to me!
Tears flow abundantly,
Oh, - bitter is
Leaving
Good bye!
A heart break word!
A word so prevalent
In Christian vocabulary,
Missionaries leave to toil far from home,
To teach the lost and help the poor,
All of them know this word;
And heart ache of
Good bye!
Leaving,
Good bye mother!
I have to leave you now
To accomplish my Father's will,-
“Anybody who leaves all for my sake”------
There, - “Behold mother, is your son”----
Trails stained with farewell tears,
In scripture, and
Heart ache!
Leaving
Why? - why leaving?
Jesus did it Himself,
Pilgrims are meant to be leaving,
And march forward towards eternity,
Passing pilgrims hurt, but
Good-bye and farewells are
See you again
dear One!
© Elizabeth Dandy
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Leaving is Loving - Quadruple Rictameter
Contributed by
Elizabeth_Dandy
on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 04:40:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Leaving
Means great heart ache
Airports, tarmac, tail lights,
Tight throats, misty eyes, - wave fare well!
Soldiers embrace loved ones to leave for war,
Mom, dad, honey ,please write to me!
Tears flow abundantly,
Oh, - bitter is
Leaving
Good bye!
A heart break word!
A word so prevalent
In Christian vocabulary,
Missionaries leave to toil far from home,
To teach the lost and help the poor,
All of them know this word;
And heart ache of
Good bye!
Leaving,
Good bye mother!
I have to leave you now
To accomplish my Father's will,-
“Anybody who leaves all for my sake”------
There, - “Behold mother, is your son”----
Trails stained with farewell tears,
In scripture, and
Heart ache!
Leaving
Why? - why leaving?
Jesus did it Himself,
Pilgrims are meant to be leaving,
And march forward towards eternity,
Passing pilgrims hurt, but
Good-bye and farewells are
See you again
dear One!
© Elizabeth Dandy
Copyright ©
Elizabeth_Dandy
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2005-04-09 16:40:11]
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Re: Leaving is Loving - Quadruple Rictameter
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by inoc on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:01:51 AM AEST
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Your writing is superb...
I have felt some heartache and your poem shows the emotions so deep in this write...
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