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Before I took back you,
It’d be a pleasure not a pain,
Kiss my dreams, pierce my vein,
And the tears fall,
You’re voice echoes through the hall,
So now I’m lying on the floor,
Pool of sweat, blood-and acid dripping.
And the dreams like fantasies are real,
But haunt me when I open my eyes,
The windows staring-streaks of red,
Upon my shadow faded blouse,
WHAT IS GOING ON IN THIS HOUSE!?!
I see your face and get scared,
Your mouth is silently screaming.
You’re eyes shocked open,
Just like in my dream-
Where the acid drips from your fear inflicted face,
But I smiled and watched your skin peel away.
That’s what haunts me to this day.
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Haunting Dreams

Contributed by AtomicPromIse on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:28:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I’d take back hell,
Before I took back you,
It’d be a pleasure not a pain,
Kiss my dreams, pierce my vein,
And the tears fall,
You’re voice echoes through the hall,
So now I’m lying on the floor,
Pool of sweat, blood-and acid dripping.
And the dreams like fantasies are real,
But haunt me when I open my eyes,
The windows staring-streaks of red,
Upon my shadow faded blouse,
WHAT IS GOING ON IN THIS HOUSE!?!
I see your face and get scared,
Your mouth is silently screaming.
You’re eyes shocked open,
Just like in my dream-
Where the acid drips from your fear inflicted face,
But I smiled and watched your skin peel away.
That’s what haunts me to this day.

Copyright Â© AtomicPromIse ... [ 2005-04-08 23:28:54]
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Re: Haunting Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Dralion on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:33:57 PM AEST
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Is this supposed to be a "shaped poem" where the lines make a shape?

And do you remember what you ate that day. Some wierd stuff going on in your head.

Or was this some sort of overnight "Brain Dump"

Re: Haunting Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Azanna on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 06:28:28 PM AEST
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I really like this, and can relate.

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