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Array ( [sid] => 90387 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => That Night [time] => 2005-04-08 23:26:04 [hometext] => This is true-My ex boyfriend was a total wierdo. [bodytext] => That night,
Around eight or nine,
You came wobbling up to my door,
Like that little goblin that you are,
You stood on my porch,
Till I heard you breathing,
That loud noise you used to make,
Quite disturbing and kind of funny,
I sat by the door,
Ear up against it,
Waiting for you to leave,
Then “knock, knock, knock”
I rolled my eyes,
As I cracked open the door,
You hunched over,
With tears,
Panting,
You carved my name into your arm,
Hugged me, bleeding!
Why did you run away AGAIN?
Why did you run away to me?
I sat there next to you,
You telling me “I love you,”
Oh! You’re so insane!
And I couldn’t leave your side,
You’d grab another knife,
But believe me that was what I always wanted to do.
Just go! But I couldn’t let you threaten to take your life,
I’d feel so guilty.
I tried to convince you to let me take you home,
But you said “I’m going, going far away from here.
Will you wait for me, I’ll be back in a few years”
I laughed, “John, you’re funny”
And then you agreed to go home,
But ran from the car,
Why did you come back?
You made me sooooo angry,
I wanted to punch you in the face,
So you finally got in the car,
But why were you hesitant to get out?
I would’ve pushed you out,
But you got out on your own,
I never wanted to talk to you again,
My life was miserable,
And you wanted to marry me,
Tell you what! That never would have happened,
Even if I did say “yes,”
I’m just glad that night is over,
As well as all the other nights I spent with you.
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That Night

Contributed by AtomicPromIse on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:26:04 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



That night,
Around eight or nine,
You came wobbling up to my door,
Like that little goblin that you are,
You stood on my porch,
Till I heard you breathing,
That loud noise you used to make,
Quite disturbing and kind of funny,
I sat by the door,
Ear up against it,
Waiting for you to leave,
Then “knock, knock, knock”
I rolled my eyes,
As I cracked open the door,
You hunched over,
With tears,
Panting,
You carved my name into your arm,
Hugged me, bleeding!
Why did you run away AGAIN?
Why did you run away to me?
I sat there next to you,
You telling me “I love you,”
Oh! You’re so insane!
And I couldn’t leave your side,
You’d grab another knife,
But believe me that was what I always wanted to do.
Just go! But I couldn’t let you threaten to take your life,
I’d feel so guilty.
I tried to convince you to let me take you home,
But you said “I’m going, going far away from here.
Will you wait for me, I’ll be back in a few years”
I laughed, “John, you’re funny”
And then you agreed to go home,
But ran from the car,
Why did you come back?
You made me sooooo angry,
I wanted to punch you in the face,
So you finally got in the car,
But why were you hesitant to get out?
I would’ve pushed you out,
But you got out on your own,
I never wanted to talk to you again,
My life was miserable,
And you wanted to marry me,
Tell you what! That never would have happened,
Even if I did say “yes,”
I’m just glad that night is over,
As well as all the other nights I spent with you.




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Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:31:07 PM AEST
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eep...that would just...freak me out. as for the poem, it has an unsteady rythem, but otherwise, really good.


Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:35:28 PM AEST
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well in my opinion the guy is sorta sweet not really that crazy haha seems sweet n a weird way nice write


Re: That Night (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 03:48:00 PM AEST
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its good but the wy its written made it little confusing to read




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