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Array ( [sid] => 90342 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can't Get Away from You [time] => 2005-04-08 15:06:58 [hometext] => *sits here muttering about stubborn-arsed men* [bodytext] =>

I can't get my mind away from the thought of you.
It's so aggravating.
I've tried again and again to make myself stop,
but it's never worked.

I have done everything to try...
Dated a complete loser.
Convinced myself that we're just friends.
Even started a fight with you on purpose.

None of that worked.
The loser was a fake drunk with no life.
We're "friends with benefits."
And even though I blocked you on MSN
and scratched out your phone number in my phone
book, we still talked within an hour...

You yourself have tried to stop talking to me.
Told me you have a crush on some girl,
told me you have no time for a relationship,
yet you left your damn watch in my room after one of your "visits."

What are we doing to ourselves? We aren't being honest.
I know there is something going on in that head of yours...
You just won't admit it.
Maybe you're just afraid of that small thing we DID have?

*sighs* Or maybe I'm just a hopelss fool. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Angelic_Demon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Can't Get Away from You

Contributed by Angelic_Demon on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 03:06:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove





I can't get my mind away from the thought of you.
It's so aggravating.
I've tried again and again to make myself stop,
but it's never worked.

I have done everything to try...
Dated a complete loser.
Convinced myself that we're just friends.
Even started a fight with you on purpose.

None of that worked.
The loser was a fake drunk with no life.
We're "friends with benefits."
And even though I blocked you on MSN
and scratched out your phone number in my phone
book, we still talked within an hour...

You yourself have tried to stop talking to me.
Told me you have a crush on some girl,
told me you have no time for a relationship,
yet you left your damn watch in my room after one of your "visits."

What are we doing to ourselves? We aren't being honest.
I know there is something going on in that head of yours...
You just won't admit it.
Maybe you're just afraid of that small thing we DID have?

*sighs* Or maybe I'm just a hopelss fool.




Copyright © Angelic_Demon ... [ 2005-04-08 15:06:58]
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Re: Can't Get Away from You (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 03:17:00 PM AEST
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mars, you're not a hopeless fool. sit him down and try and talk about it. if not, well, bloody men eh?!

love you xxx


Re: Can't Get Away from You (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 06:03:25 PM AEST
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Awww...you're not a hopeless fool..
But you do need to sit down and talk about this with him..or things will never change.

I hope it all works for you soon.

*hugs tons* Phil xxx


Re: Can't Get Away from You (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 10:21:07 PM AEST
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eh...I am not in for the rant poems....good tho...good expression..but im more for rhyme person....::sigh::hope all works out

Clark


Re: Can't Get Away from You (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 10:30:39 PM AEST
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Hope all works out for you. Enjoyed the write.

The Voice


Re: Can't Get Away from You (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:14:34 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed this work. i felt you poured her heart into the words and did a damn good job at it. hope it all works out, keep up the good work

~vermillion~




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