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There is nothing I can do
I can’t compete with who you want
I will never satisfy you
I try to give it my all
But still I disappoint everyone
I feel like just giving up
Get it over, get it done
And I have nothing left for me
This is it, this is my life
And no matter how hard I try
I can’t even get this right
So I give it up now
I can no longer stand the pain
I fall to the ground… so slow…
Just lye there in the rain
Pushed to the side I live alone
Giving up I am left in the dust
Dragging back I can’t continue
I’ve fallen behind and can’t catch up
I am used to the feeling
So leave me here to cry
Disappointment is all I am
I’m never good enough, let me die
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Disappointment

Contributed by blue_angel on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:09:28 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

With your expectations so high
There is nothing I can do
I can’t compete with who you want
I will never satisfy you
I try to give it my all
But still I disappoint everyone
I feel like just giving up
Get it over, get it done
And I have nothing left for me
This is it, this is my life
And no matter how hard I try
I can’t even get this right
So I give it up now
I can no longer stand the pain
I fall to the ground… so slow…
Just lye there in the rain
Pushed to the side I live alone
Giving up I am left in the dust
Dragging back I can’t continue
I’ve fallen behind and can’t catch up
I am used to the feeling
So leave me here to cry
Disappointment is all I am
I’m never good enough, let me die

Copyright Â© blue_angel ... [ 2005-04-06 22:09:28]
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Re: Disappointment (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:17:38 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
We all fall short but that's no reason to quit. If someone is putting such exspectations on u then they are the one that's doing wrong.
U gotta get up, wipe the tears and keep on keeping on.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace to u,
emy

Re: Disappointment (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 10:46:00 PM AEST
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Your better than you think u r just keep believin

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