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Array ( [sid] => 8999 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Believe [time] => 2002-12-21 07:40:00 [hometext] => "this is the first pome i have writen and i am very happy about it. i didnt now what i was writing in the beging, but this is what it turnd out to be. hope you like it. sorry for the bad spelling. i had to write it quickly." [bodytext] => As i look across the sky,
I started to cry,
for all the folks
who lost their lives,
for all the people
who fought tell the very end,
for all the kids
who had to suffer,
for all the infents growing up
not even knowing their own mother,
for all the living things
who had to watch their country cover in red,
nothing to eat ,
not even a crumb of bread,
watching in misery
hopeing to find an end,
but yet they never gave up
for they have the power of God on their side,
and as long as they believe
they end is very near. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 48 [informant] => tollo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Believe

Contributed by tollo on Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 07:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As i look across the sky,
I started to cry,
for all the folks
who lost their lives,
for all the people
who fought tell the very end,
for all the kids
who had to suffer,
for all the infents growing up
not even knowing their own mother,
for all the living things
who had to watch their country cover in red,
nothing to eat ,
not even a crumb of bread,
watching in misery
hopeing to find an end,
but yet they never gave up
for they have the power of God on their side,
and as long as they believe
they end is very near.

Copyright © tollo ... [ 2002-12-21 07:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by Sumiko on Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 12:18:05 PM AEST
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Nice. You have a good talent. Keep developing.

Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 01:22:23 PM AEST
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Well hello tollo i really enjoyed reading this poem, this poem has a good message behind it and some strong wording...thanks for sharing it i think it's a beautifully written poem....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by emmafarah on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 02:20:47 AM AEST
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oh my god... i didn't know my little tollo could write some thingso ...emotional. and powerful. thanx, dude...that really hits home:P

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