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Suicide

Contributed by BabyTears89 on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:01:27 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Im taking the walk
The walk that I take after something bad has happened
The one I take in the rain
To talk about my problems
And get them out so I can see that rainbow
The rainbow of smiles that I know happens

But this walk is different than any other walk
This walk is rainless
But I need the walk
And I am pretending that the rain is there
But truly it isnt
So it is defeating the purpose of keeping truth instead of lies

So this walk has sucked me in
Into a different kind of walk that Ive never been on before
One full of lies
And no truth involved
So this much mean its the start
The start of the end
The end of the truth

Now I am at the point in my walk where I usually turn back
But this time I dont turn back
I am at the river
And I cant swim
And I walk in
Slowly but surely
Its well over my head
And the waves have overcome me

Im no longer walking
Im no longer swimming
Im not longer trying
I am giving up
Im no longer breathing
Im no longer living
This walk has ended at the bottom of this river
The river that helps me to commit suicide

But then I wake up
Up from this bad dream
It was a nightmare
And its raining
So I know that everything will be alright
And that I dont have to
Dont have to give up
And commit suicide
Im alive
And smiling with the rainbow of smiles

Copyright © BabyTears89 ... [ 2005-04-05 02:01:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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