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Worn, graceless and torn a part
Betrayed, feeling atrophy no sign of hope
Tormented, peeved unable to cope
Traumatised by senseless human sins
Wavered numb bruised beyond the skin
Reflections cast broken and marred
A stained and embittered heart that's charred
Silent tears succumb falling rapidly in pace
Like hot blood they bleed trailing upon my face
Embracing hate while I once carried your name
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A wounded discarded heart...

Contributed by mina-1 on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:41:28 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Untold secrets dwell admist my heart
Worn, graceless and torn a part
Betrayed, feeling atrophy no sign of hope
Tormented, peeved unable to cope
Traumatised by senseless human sins
Wavered numb bruised beyond the skin
Reflections cast broken and marred
A stained and embittered heart that's charred
Silent tears succumb falling rapidly in pace
Like hot blood they bleed trailing upon my face
Embracing hate while I once carried your name
This heart now lays broken and baring the shame.

Copyright Â© mina-1 ... [ 2005-04-04 08:41:28]
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Re: A wounded discarded heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 02:39:30 PM AEST
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beautifuly written sorry 4 your pain though i

wish u peace and love . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: A wounded discarded heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:46:12 PM AEST
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Sue ,
You r poem is beautiful and yet alot of pain;
"reflections cast broken and marred a
a stained and embitterd heart that's charred"
That is great.

My prayers are with you
Leia36

Re: A wounded discarded heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:02:34 AM AEST
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Yes, this is all too emotive for me… it breaks me to read this.
Yet I cannot help but love your poetic reflections.
They always stand tall against your background of anguish and allow one to feel and live, even though momentarily, and vicariously through your experiences.
A powerful and bold approach, sincere in regards, yet saddening.

“Traumatised by senseless human sins
Wavered numb bruised beyond the skin”

-Truly heart wrenching composition.

Re: A wounded discarded heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 08:32:20 AM AEST
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What you see as a broken heart of shame another sees as a treasure that has yet to be awakened.

And, one day I believe someone will find a way into your heart and you will smile and maybe turn your toes under in happiness.

But until then keep on writing for it is a way to let the pain go.

It worked for me.

Loved your poem.

Kie

Re: A wounded discarded heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:53:40 PM AEST
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IF PAIN WAS AN OCEAN I'M SURE WE'D ALL DROWN! SOMETIMES LOVE CAN BE SO SAD & EVEN MAKE US SO MAD!! BUT WE GOTTA BE REAL STRONG,OR WE'LL NOT LAST FOR VERY LONG!! WHAT A WRITER & POET YOU MUST BE TO BRING SUCH POETRY TO EVEYONE INCLUDING ME!!! ANOTHER GREAT ONE!!!!

Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!

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