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The whole world just seems to go away
The moments we share puts Magic in the air
My heart Lifts as high as the Rockies
My smiles can not be stopped
All seems as it should be
Just because you are near

Funny ole stories of your travels and encounters
Some sad Some Funny Some scary
But still you go on.
No doubt there will be many more.
You tell me over and over again
I give you courage
Support and Love
And though it seems
Like all that is not enuff
But yet You say it is.
Our hearts will forever be together
Come back thick or thin

Because I believe in you
I believe that your time is coming to shine
Is just around the corner
Then we will be happy together
Always knowing each other is safe
And never will you be alone
For I pray the thoughts of me will forever keep
you warm
As I whisper your name quietly to the winds

Peace in your dreams as well as in mine
Slumber peacefully my lost whaling shipmate
Follow the light It will one day bring you home again.

Whisper
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Whisper in the wind

Contributed by Whisper on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 03:37:26 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sometimes When we are together
The whole world just seems to go away
The moments we share puts Magic in the air
My heart Lifts as high as the Rockies
My smiles can not be stopped
All seems as it should be
Just because you are near

Funny ole stories of your travels and encounters
Some sad Some Funny Some scary
But still you go on.
No doubt there will be many more.
You tell me over and over again
I give you courage
Support and Love
And though it seems
Like all that is not enuff
But yet You say it is.
Our hearts will forever be together
Come back thick or thin

Because I believe in you
I believe that your time is coming to shine
Is just around the corner
Then we will be happy together
Always knowing each other is safe
And never will you be alone
For I pray the thoughts of me will forever keep
you warm
As I whisper your name quietly to the winds

Peace in your dreams as well as in mine
Slumber peacefully my lost whaling shipmate
Follow the light It will one day bring you home again.

Whisper

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Re: Whisper in the wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 07:47:13 AM AEST
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Lovely imagery.
There is a way in the words you have written, the story you tell that brings such feeling to this piece. A longing, whimsical, loving feeling.
So very well done!!!!!
Bravo!!

Re: Whisper in the wind (User Rating: 1 )
by reflections on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 07:52:11 AM AEST
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An expression of love such as this is rare. The uniqueness of such honesty deserves attention, and comment. Your words show your heart. Your heart proclaims your oneness with yourself. Your thoughts are well worth reading, and more than deserving of attention. Keep writing.

John

Re: Whisper in the wind (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 07:59:58 AM AEST
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I really like this. The love you have described is rare.

I especially adore that first stanza, I xcan relate to that one a lot.

Beautiful write,
Phil

Re: Whisper in the wind (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:05:41 AM AEST
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What an extra ordinary write, i loved this a lot
the flow of the whole poem was outstanding.

Well done on a wonderfull poem.

Jane

Re: Whisper in the wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:12:52 AM AEST
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excellent write , well done

Re: Whisper in the wind (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:12:19 AM AEST
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wow that was an excellent write, it flowed so perfectly, amazing poem,
pix xx

Re: Whisper in the wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 12:54:58 PM AEST
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You weave words and make them into something that makes the reader pause because it is so beautiful, you never want the poem to end.

Perfection.

Kie

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