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Array ( [sid] => 89502 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Reflection [time] => 2005-03-31 17:43:37 [hometext] => its about a girl who keeps hurting her self, but it feels like she doesnt have control, like its not her. Like its someone else doing it to her, so she blames a figure, i just call katie, which katie really is her... confusing, i know! [bodytext] => A girl named Katie takes a blade and runs it in her skin
Instead the blood drips down my arm, as she looks at me with a grin

As all this blood flows from my veins
So does my pain my body contains

Katie still takes that blade and slits her wrist
Then she looks at me and smiles with a twist

I scream for her to stop but she cant hear me
Then she takes the blade deeper, while I scream for her to let me be

All I can do is sit here and cry
While she laughs watching me die

I just sit on this floor , blood everywhere, as I still cry
I look in the mirror, shes there, so I brake it. through my reflection, I watch Katie die...........

Thank you for reading! Plz comment , just to let me know what u think.... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 270 [topic] => 13 [informant] => life_goes_on900 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Reflection

Contributed by life_goes_on900 on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:43:37 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A girl named Katie takes a blade and runs it in her skin
Instead the blood drips down my arm, as she looks at me with a grin

As all this blood flows from my veins
So does my pain my body contains

Katie still takes that blade and slits her wrist
Then she looks at me and smiles with a twist

I scream for her to stop but she cant hear me
Then she takes the blade deeper, while I scream for her to let me be

All I can do is sit here and cry
While she laughs watching me die

I just sit on this floor , blood everywhere, as I still cry
I look in the mirror, shes there, so I brake it. through my reflection, I watch Katie die...........

Thank you for reading! Plz comment , just to let me know what u think....

Copyright © life_goes_on900 ... [ 2005-03-31 17:43:37]
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Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by hotrod55 on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:52:40 PM AEST
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i want to hear more about this katie its a very nice poem. i know someone who has phycological problems like that.... very good write

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:53:43 PM AEST
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hey you explained it very well,i too cut myself to relieve the pain but yea its like its not me,do you know why?its because we are not in our right mind doing that,when u are in so much pain that the only way to forget is by more pain,then the pain will never stop,its basically an addiction,you get so use to hurting that you feel empty without it,i can honestly say cutting only feels good for the moment and afterwards all that pain is still there,i tey to find other ways to deal with my issues yea its hatd but worth a try,nothing in life is bad enough to want to die,i was raped at 13 its one of the reasons i got problems with cutting,but now i just go to god with my probs even if hes not there it feels like im giving my issues away,i did like the heart in this poem it deeply touched me ,i just hate to hear that katie is hurting so bad and not wanting to fix it....if i can be of any help my aol is brittstoner my yahoo is bioch6662003,
if u ever need to chat or anything instant message me ill be more then glad to be a friend:)

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:35:02 PM AEST
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hey there Life goes On
Great poem, I too cut myself and it's really not me. It sounds as though you may have DID-Dissasociative Identity Disorder or Borderline Personallity Disorder. I suffer from both. I have many alters like Katie. The one that cuts me is named No One. I was sexually abused for about 10 years by a family member. You may need to find help such as a therapist and/or Phychaitrist. If you ever need anything or more info please feel free to contact me!

Evilnn@aol.com

Please, take care

Eve

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Naveen on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 07:40:33 AM AEST
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Thats grt poem it really moved a statsis to turbulence

thats me.

great great write
lookin for more writes from u

bye!!
naveen

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 08:09:09 AM AEST
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that was dark and deeply written, hope to see more from you,
pix xx

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